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Long ago, a very lonely chimera named Discord fell in love with a princess, but because of her rejecting his love, caused chaos over Equestria. The princess and her sister defeated him, causing the creature to flee from civilization and into the Everfree forest, to never be seen again. Or so they say!

Fluttershy is a very shy animal lover who isn't very confident about anything. Especially her singing voice. But when a new resident starts to cause chaos in Ponyville, will she despise him like the rest or will she find the melody within him.
Based on Rigoletto, Beauty and the Beast, Phantom of the Opera, and DisneyFanatic2364's Bride of Discord.
WARNING: VERY, VERY, VERY FLUTTERCORD! FLUTTERCORD HATERS, LEAVE NOW!:pinkiegasp:
Okay then! :pinkiehappy: On with the story!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

Keep going! I am excited to be reading a brand new Fluttercord fanfic! :twilightsmile: :yay:

7375764 Yay!! I'm glad you liked it. :yay: Don't worry, I'll update as often as I can! :heart:

Well, I'm in love. This is too cute. Keep at it! :heart:

I enjoyed it very much! Though, I hope you make your chapters a little longer next time.

it needs narration and more details. But sense this is your first fiction you get 3 points for the idea and 2 points for trying. average 5/10

You need to make more description of the surroundings and how she's feeling as she sings etc
If you need to know more of what im talking about read storys Like draquanequus of noter mare and ather things.

7376681 That pretty much summed up my opinion.
Oh yeah, and Rigoletto was one of my fav movies as a kid. Wish we didn't get rid of all our VHS tapes.

great story and i do have some problems that other users have pointed out:

I enjoyed it very much! Though, I hope you make your chapters a little longer next time.

it needs narration and more details. But sense this is your first fiction you get 3 points for the idea and 2 points for trying.

You need to make more description of the surroundings and how she's feeling as she sings etc
If you need to know more of what im talking about read storys Like draquanequus of noter mare and ather things.

but other than that great job on the fluttercord fanfic

Can't wait for more! It vary interesting... in a good way

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