Likewise on the song; I thought the reading went better with the song actually playing in the background.

One or two of these lines I've actually spoken myself as some point - no, nopony heard them, I'm quite sure - so I am bound to have some sort of emotional investment in the story's outcome, whatever it might have been.  (One-shots occasionally do that to me.)

>>802476802476Glad to hear.

why da fuck does this NOT have more views?! WHY?

i wish this had a conclusion, and not an open ending.

>>845668845668I wouldn't really know where to go from here. I just heard the song (Which is beautiful) and wanted to write. Didn't have any other ideas.