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KnightMysterio


I am the Storm Scribe. Let my words thunder across all creation! Let my imagination rain down and bring life to new worlds and adventures. Above all else, may you enjoy what meager gifts I bring...

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Sometimes even the strongest among us can break. Not even our most shining stars are immune to despair. As Princess Luna and Dragon Lord Ember soon learn...

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Bit annoyed that you're using "I'm incompetent" as Celestia's primary reason for suicide since that's the go to line whenever Celestia's being self critical. Though if Celestia is suffering from depression it makes sense that she'll emphasize her problems.

Well let's see...she banished ehr sister to the moon for not seeing how she was suffering, then tooka student and utter fubar the realtionshipa nd she went off became a bully/tyrant in anoher world.
almost got canterlot conquered by the changlings and almsot got ehr neice and Twilight killed, and never apologized to Twilight for how she reacted at the wedding.

also the fact she sent Twilight to save the Crystal Empire and made it some form fo test that could of backfired so baddly.
by sheer luck did things turn out well.

She made alot of big and almost big mistakes, and she the ruler as well, it's no wonder she lost belief and trust in herself.
Sounds like it been building up for a long time, and she surpressed everything till it broke her.

Okay, I'm hooked. Good use of Ember! Can't wait to see Celestia's reasoning on why she tried to kill herself. Poor Luna!

interesting you have my attention thoe this is a very serous thing so i wont where any kids gloves if i see anything i do not aprove of i will atack the plot point

If there's one thing I find annoying about your stories, it's that you start so many interesting ones and then never continue them. But that Team Fortress crossover, that has half a million words somehow... :derpytongue2:

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