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A frustrated writer who just wants people to like their stories.

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"They said it would be over in a month.... But it went on and on, seemingly no end to it all, with more pain and horrors that anypony could imagine before."
-Lt. Rainbow Dash, 4th Air Dragoons

Rainbow Dash has seen it all, the sadness, the horrors, and the madness of war. But when a new officer comes and join the army against Equestria's new offensive against King Sombra, she believes that she is about to see more madness than she has ever seen before.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

Looks interesting. Read Later listed! :twilightsmile:

Well, I wonder how her taking charge will be handled later? Breaking rank, but for a good cause leads to interesting outcomes. And Blueblood as a major character? Curious how this will go.

Again, as with civilian administration, Celestia (being the Equestrian army's highest authority) allowing this kind of tomfoolery in her noble-born officers makes her look like a complete moron, since she could stop it if she just tried.

Why allow nobles to buy a commission if they all prove to be incompetent? Maybe Celestia could've won this already if she wasn't being, well, kind of a dumbass.

Hmm...

Will more chapters be done? I am shocked to see snobish Blueblood actually leave his ivory tower :rainbowderp:

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