... I'm not high, that's just my personality... 🦄💯🌈
Something sad and slightly traumatizing happens to Rainbow Dash. Her Marefriend Pinkie Pie tries to cheer her up. But will it work? Tragedy tag is cause Scootaloo died. Pinkiedash galore! Alternate universe cause Scooltaoo hasn't kicked the bucket yet in the show. At least as far as I know... 
THIS IS A ONE SHOT,
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Ugh.
7346310 this story is so good I love the words and plot but hate that Scootaloo died ugh, or this story completely sucks ugh?
7346539
Honestly I think you had a good premise but I think you made a mistake in the presentation.
To me the problem was that you start right after Scoots is gone but we don't get anything from it. It is far too sudden and we cannot really get into the story. I would make chapters starting before this that lead up to this. Get some scenes with Dash and Scoots, Pinkie and Scoots, and Pinkie and Dash. You need to establish their relationships and their problems. That would help a lot with giving us the necessary context.
I appreciate the PinkieDash moment for sure so getting more story would really improve the story.
7347532 this was just a one shot, I'll put that in there...
7346539 second option.
7347706 oh, well then I did not need to hear that. Thx for nothing.
But at least you read it! 
what did you not like about it?
7350022 Okay then. Thx for your criticism I'll try to keep it in mind.
So, why have PinkieDash groups put this in the "background shippings" albums if they're the main focus of this fanfic?
7363155 cuz the focus is on Rainbow losing Scootaloo. Pinkie Dash is a minor in the story because the main point is about Rainbow mourning Scootaloo and Pinkie comforting her. It's not exactly about her and Pinkie exclusively.
7347706 well screw you my good fellow.
7346310 you never seem to actually like any of my stoires so why do u bother reading?
7448489 God, you are such a whiny B****.
7448632 well if you think I'm so whiny, why are you wasting your amazing precious time chatting with someone as bitchy as me? Also, I wasn't looking for an insult, all I wanted to know was why you always say such bad stuff about my stories. But if you would rather insult than answer a question the calm mature way then just fine. But just know that your comments will be deleted. Adeui.
Also if you call me a b**** again, I'm blocking u.
7450163 Not if I block you first! Haha I win!
#manchild
7450176 okay have good day! I hope you get happier too. You sound like such a gloomy Gus. But if you block me, or I block you, I'm happy either way, so have a nice life. Btw, I'm deleting all of your comments.
I really do wish we could've been friends. But I guess a user with a cool name like Rainbow87dash doesn't want anything to do with a whiny b**** like me.
Oh well, I could've used another friend.
See ya.
Sayonara.
Ciao.
Salut!
If you don't see this I could care less.
Anyway again, Have a nice life...
Btw, I win. Not you. Leave this comment section. Leave me.
7450176
Uhhhhhhhhh
Feels
7717138 glad you liked it.
Wait, u did like it, right?
noooooo the feels!