An autistic brony who is the owner of an OC pony named Charming Thunder and a big fan of Star Wars.
This story is a sequel to Equestria Wars Episode XIV: The Friendship Awakens
With Charming Thunder's return, a ritual is being prepared in secret to revive his brother. Charming Thunder now confronts a rebellion who's objective is to kill him commanded by a stallion named Zero along with a pony with a thirst for vengeance nicknamed; the Red Hood.
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Seriously, what's with all the dislikes?
7606397 ikr
I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
I say this not as a friend, or as a hater, but as a fellow author who wants to see you make better, grander future stories. Charming Thunder is getting old. He's boring. I understand you really like him (he's your icon, after all), but he's not a compelling character. He's been in literally every story you've written. He's been done to death.
Will you let his star fade like all others eventually do? Will you let Charming's next story be his last? Probably not, but it would be wise to let a new, fresh off the Pony Generator character run the show.
7633024 he's the main character of the series and my oc.
7648063 How about this: you could give him an apprentice to be the focus of a new series. That way you haven't completely given up on Charming, but he's also not the main focus of the story. Have him teach instead of be taught, after all I don't think there are very many more lessons for him to learn.
This can work with Equestria Wars as well. Just have the focus of the story be shifted to that of his padawan.
Has Charming Thunder lost it building a Death Star. That'll make it a bigger Target. Not only that if he keeps keeping secrets from everyone he'll eventually lose their trust.