Echo is a pony who is considerably low on the social ladder at Mareston High. Ever since his first year there, he has always felt passion and emotion for a popular pony known by the name of Soul. His courage suffers though, and he struggles to pluck up enough of it to confess to Soul. However, will all change? And what will be the final result?
********** Please Note **********
This is my first ever FanFiction. I have never even written anything resembling a story before, so honest criticism is encouraged. Thanks if you do read this and bye for now!
Chapters (7)
Ok, if Echo is a grey unicorn stallion with a brown mane, I am going to be VERY pissed off.
[After reading]
From the spelling alone, I can tell you're not American. (Maths, and I have no idea what Form class is...)
Anyway, a decent start. Pony does not need to be capitalized, nor does saddlebags. Your word use is good (descriptive, not using "said" every time.)
I'll track this if you want any help.
Do note, stories like this don't generally get that much hype. All OCs, relationship with OC, etc. But don't let that discourage you. I've got to work in a world made by someone else.
-Echo
Main character of Fallout Equestria: Fading Echoes.
783757 thanks for the honest criticism! I wasn't expecting any response. Oh and yeah, I'm British
783783 So, what the heck is Form class anyway?
783874 well, in each year you have different classes or forms which you do the register in. This is your form class.
Wow... Well I need more chapters!
I enjoyed reading it, somethings gotta happen. 
Twisted my stomach only reading that much 
786537 thanks so much! Means a lot mate
how sad
799045 You haven't read chapter 4 yet though mate.
Yes i have
801638 you had? Sorry about that then
Dam i guess love can block out some pain right
829569 Heh, yeah.
I'm about to write Chapter 6 so stick around if you want 
Thanks for the comment!
I cant wait to read more from you
832453 Thanks, means a lot.
Was wondering why I was following you. Checked this story's comments and found out why.
15 year old me was rather odd.
5258444 I know that feel! I was 15 when I wrote this garbage.
Alas, it was not all in vain. The experience has been firmly tucked away, and I'm condensing all my efforts into this new novel that I'm excited to be writing about once more!
Christ, ~2.4 years seems so insignificant of a time-period on paper, but so much has changed.
Though I doubt it based on the phrasing of your comment, I hope you stick around to see what's in store! It's vastly different, and it'd be worth judging whether you dislike my writing style via a more updated source.
(That is, if you even read fics anymore. I assume far too much.)
5259524 Read plenty. Reviewed more. Went through the rise and fall of the Train Wreck Explorers, dozens of dramafests, and so on.
I actually have a beard to fondly stroke as I reminisce.