After a horrible accident, Rainbow Dash is put into a coma, and her friends struggle to come to terms with the loss, the emotions that threaten to overwhelm them, and the question lurking at the back of everyone's mind:
Could it be better to let go?
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Need to fix your spacing and do longer chapters but I like it. When are you updating?
Great story!
Yes, I also like that dream she had beforehand. I wonder if she'll try to contact her again in the dream? Would Pinkie be more likely to listen next time? This started off great - I can't wait to see where it goes.
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Thanks! Appreciate the feedback. I'm updating on Sundays and Wednesdays.
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Thank you very much!
This is nice! Though in my opinion, I don't feel as if Pinkie would just walk away and ignore Rainbow Dash while she's bursting into tears. Especially since she hates it when ponies do the same to her.
I really like it though!
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Thanks! Pinkie's going to be dealing with that very issue quite soon on, actually...
Aww, she caught on. I wonder if Rainbow will try to contact her again?
Wow...So Dash was making contact with her? I hope Dash does it again soon...
Different ways of handling grief already - and opposite approaches to denial, too. Rarity wanted to talk to ease her troubled mind, but Applejack just wants to avoid the whole subject.
Yes, the emotions are stronger in this one - Chapters are short, yet fleshed out and it keeps me reading. I hope Pinkie has another dream.
Wow, a China trip? That sounds cool. Students from Lincoln High School in Tacoma, Washington are going to China this summer as well. I wish you the best. ^^ Contention between Pinkie and Twilight seems to be growing. Hopefully they'll reach an understanding.
You skipped chapter 7.
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Oops. This technically is chapter 8, (Counting prologue.) I'll fix it. Serves me write for using the auto-name, eh?
7805892 it makes sense though. I always name each chapter myself so that stuff doesn't happen.
I read all 7 chapters today, along with the author's notes. I am sooo impatient for the next chapter!!! And please don't kill Rainbow at the end. I actually love reading about Rainbow Dash, especially when something bad happens to her. Because, who likes happy endings?
Anyway, I'm literally gonna cry if Rainbow dies 😭😭😭