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    Scarlet Reign's Stories (5)


    Their lives an existence of different time and place, a world that was consumed in war and torment. In the human realm there was the Soulus empire, whose conflict from within had left its glory into absolute ruin and certain collapse. By the end of a bloody civil war, it seemed like peace had finally returned to them at last. Or so it would seem to fact.

    After a year of tranquility, a year of harmony, their empire endured, slowly rebuilding its kingdom as well as their lost glory.

    However, a new problem emerge that threatens the empire and the very world into eternal darkness. A foreign invader from within, schemed and ployed its darken army, massing with considerable pace and numbers to seize the throne. With the

    lives at stake, new challenges must be face along with a terrible toll that must be paid through blood and tears.

    The darkness began to settle its move, starting at the unsuspecting of all places. Fortress Ironcloud...

    (I would like to give my thanks to the proofreaders and editors on helping me out: Alicorn Priest, Dr.Bob, lolcatsmanseven)

    Edit: Just to note that this story is slightly more focus on the human side of the story and that I will be revising the chapters in the days that follow.

    First Published
    20th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    27th Feb 2013

    Comments ( 18 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    "He sensed a disturbance in the force"

    As if millions of voices suddenly cried out in terror and were suddenly silenced.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 16h ago · · ·
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    >>782612 I'll see where this goes. And that better not be second best pony Twilight, only beat by best pony Luna.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 16h ago · · ·
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    >>784030 1. Villain better not the Twilight. 2. Luna is best pony.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>784043

    Villian...Twilight :rainbowlaugh: Now why would I ever do that. Don't worry, don't worry, I assure that I won't make Twilight an antagonist. And for Luna, she won't be in the story, although there will be a few appearances in due time:twilightsmile:

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    was close to ignoring this, not saying it's bad by any means, im going to stick with this if not for nightmare moon.......

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 5h ago · · ·
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    formatting on this site uses square brackets [ ] rather than < >

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 5h ago · · ·
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    >>1269632

    OOps, how did that get in there :P

    #9 · Chapter 8 · 36w, 36m ago · · ·
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    I like the new name.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 12w, 53m ago · · ·
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    This is the stuff I love to see in a fanfiction, someone taking the base world and expanding on it greatly. I love this little snipped you gave us and can't wait to read more. :raritystarry:

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 11w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This was a decent setup chapter, and I did enjoy the interactions between these regiment members. However, you do need to go over this chapter. I saw quite a few moments where you used their inappropriately, as well as some errors in spacing. Still really interesting, though. :twilightsmile:

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 10w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Alright, now that we've cleared this chapter, I can honestly say that I am invested in this. The details of this place were great, and I especially loved all the horribly gruesome things these doomed soldiers had to go up against. Good job.

    #13 · Chapter 4 · 10w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Odd choice, but I'm not the one making this story.

    #14 · Chapter 5 · 10w, 18h ago · · ·
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    Her voice was feminine, but sounded cold with a glow of strange purple.

    I am confused by what you are trying to say here.

    Aside from this, the chapter is very good. I love the details about the government system, and Twilight's addition to the story will hopefully bring much enjoyment.

    #15 · Chapter 5 · 10w, 16h ago · · ·
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    >>2264143

    Ah, that one. An error on my grammars. Already fixed.

    #16 · Chapter 4 · 10w, 16h ago · · ·
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    >>2249958

    It was a precaution. If people was starting to get confuse by my sentence and grammars, at least I have gathering summary so they won't be lost

    #17 · Chapter 6 · 9w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Well, I can honestly say I have no idea what the heck is going on right now, but I'm also invested. :pinkiesmile:

    #18 · Chapter 7 · 8w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I like this idea of Twilight being sent as a diplomatic embarrassed, as well as the relationships she's developed during her stay. I'm still a little confused by what's going on, but in a good way. The kind that makes you want to stick around because the payoff will be worth it.

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