Berry Punch has spent much of her time at the local Ponyville bar, Heck, she's spent much of her life staring at the bottom of a bottle. With 3 days left till her birthday, she tries to hide from Pinkie Pie and the world.
But the ponies of the town are looking out for Berry Punch. One-by-one they meet with her in hopes that she will understand how important she is to them and how close she is to pulling away from the bottle for good. But will it be enough?
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Film Noir Narration
Berry Punch pouring her heart out like old wine from a bottle
Ponies showing kindness and love to others
Chances for characters to do the right thing
Heart-to-Heart talks
The perfect story style to turn into an audio drama
Chapters (1)
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I'm just saying... :P
I'll probably end up doing the audio drama myself pretty soon though :P
This has a lot of potential... a Mane Six / Berry Punch intervention session (or series of them)? That's a friendship problem you'll never hear about on the show unless they bump their rating up a couple notches.
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Thank you! I really want to show how Berry Punch can work through a problem with friends helping her, though it's uncertain how this will turn out storywise...at least in the current part of the story. We'll see :)
Oh. My. Gosh.
F-A-V-E-D!
This hit me right in the feels!
This was ripe with bittersweet, (One of my favourite tones of stories) and I loved it!
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Yay! Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this out in film noir style. Just wait till we get to the party in the story...
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Oh, I cannot wait.