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Featured Sci-Fi Story: "Equus Metamorphosis" ( http://bit.ly/1YnanMR )

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It’s one thing to believe you’re the whole world and quite another to realize that’s actually true. Aurora Ray has just been told, by the residents living in his head, that he is their entire universe and it’s up to him to keep them safe. His everyday actions affect the Equestrian world in subtle ways, so Twilight Sparkle, her friends, every resident of Ponyville and beyond have banded together to influence Aurora’s life so he, in-turn, can help them.

It wouldn’t be quite as stressful if the ponies would simply stop taking over his body during key moments in his life…

--You might like this story if you also like/know of:--
Japanese anime where a large group of fantastic characters band together to help one average person get their life back on track
Unique Transformation stories
Plurality/Multiplicity
The Netflix show Sense8 (That's some good stuff right there, tell you what)
Suspense and Mystery in small doses with bits of drama thrown in
Seeing virtually every major pony in the show eventually in the story
A unique method of problem-solving involving several characters/one body
Situations where literally anypony can comment on anything at anytime


(Rated T for some sexual references, suggestive themes, crude/vulgar language)

Stock image is from deviantart user pynipple:
http://pynipple.deviantart.com/art/new-planet-stock-20-98552682

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 38 )

Nice! Please write more. :applecry:

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Thank you, Anonymous! *hugs* I plan on writing this very soon. I love how this story has developed! As a writer, it's fun to see how storylines arrive from such a simple spark. Stay tuned!

7299121

Oh! *releases hug* I always forget about the release part. Sorry. *Sweatdrop*

Off to write and not at all run away from an awkward social situationnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!

*takes off*

7299145 Well, another one to mutilate in their sleep...

Allons-y—I mean, all right, after about 2 days worth of time, I've finally read the first chapter of this... Huh, you said that you have trouble with letting go after hugging. Why did I miss and fall on my face that one time? Also I what I've read of your fanfics so far, though I mostly focus on Equus Metamophus (Metamorphosis you dunderhead!) thank you, why are you based on the smarter Twilight anyways, So yeah, I like this though I like Equus Metamorphosis more, and even... dammit I for—OH YEAH so can I have a hug despite me being extremely afraid of touching other people? I mean another one? Unless you haven't let go since two days ago and I'm really inattentive?

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Ah thank you both for reading my story! I'm happy you're enjoying both this one and "Equus Metamorphosis." *double hugs* Thank you for checking it out at my recommendation! I'll be adding more chapters to both this story and "Equus Metamorphosis," plus adding a new story every day or two :) *triple hugs* More hugs than you know what to do with! :D

Is it just me that thought of Dark Souls when Celestia made her entrance? More specifically when Solaire is talking about the sun and how he wished he could be so 'grossly incandescent?'

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Is it no wonder, for we shall ALL PRAISE THE SUN! :D

Thanks for reading! Stay tuned for more adventures!

Hmm... this... actually is really interesting. I like the idea of it. It feels more unique? Yes I believe this calls for a fave and like. You're doing well, Please continue.

Comment posted by That Sun Praising Author deleted Jun 16th, 2016

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*Brofists you in a way that causes a small sun to appear between our fists, lighting up the night*

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Awww thank you so much! *Squees* Your fav and like mean a lot to me! I am in-love with the concept of this story and am having so much fun writing it! I guarantee you it's gonna nearly impossible to find a story quite like this on fimfiction :) Stay tuned to see what happens to our wonderful Ray and his darling ponies! <3

“You better not break her heart, Ray!” Celestia yelled. “Or you’ll find yourself waking up naked in the mall somewhere! I guarantee it!”

So he doesn't already do that? :trollestia: What a never-nude...

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(Naked Ray wakes up inside mall)
Friend Security Guard: "What man? You lose a bet?"
Ray; "I blew it all last night. I'm afraid I prematurely shot my wad on what was supposed to be a dry run if you will, so I'm afraid I have something of a mess on my hands."
Friend Security Guard: "...You do you, man."

7323415 Please put that in the story, that would be hilarious.

7323487

HOLY SHIZ

Hey, hey, hey

Check this idea out:

A Funke in Equestria

Tobias: "Why hello there, your majesty! I hear you are in need of a hero with a fiery heart who can rescue these children lost to you! Believe me, your majesty, there is no one more flaming than me!"

Celestia: "..."

Tobias: "I have developed a method to reach these children, based on the mere act of talking. I call it 'Child's Talking.' I will not rest until every mare and stallion knows about the Child'sTalker Tobias Funke!"

Celestia: "...Get out of my throne room right now."

Tobias: Oh...I've blown it hard again, haven't I? Every time!"

Gaze upon the majesty, coming soon all over fimfiction...
https://i.gyazo.com/65f84773038b70ffbade270713b354ad.png

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..nah, mall nudity is better.

Cool, I didn't know about this

This makes me wonder if it was a accident that Equestria is there, or Discord deciding to have some severe shenanigans.

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This is one of those stories that falls under the radar for some people, because it's got a unique premise and it's something I doubt has many stories here on fimfiction. Really focuses on the whole "Is this real or is this fantasy?" question.

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Indeed! The thing about this situation is that it's very open-ended right now, so there's almost no evidence to suggest which way it might go. :)

7310097 No! Praise the Moon!

7381934

*Sun and Moon collide and the Earth explodes*

Twilight: ...

7382847

Oh he can bleed, but you just picked up on a very important clue about the nature of his connection with Lyra...it's just vague enough to not tell you too much though :P

Wow, what a way to start. Can see this as a really bizarre anime

7387702

Oh I'd love it if this was an anime! I made sure the start throws you into the action in the way the human protagonist is thrown into everything. :) Enjoy reading it! :D

inb4 glock fanboys

7387755 i just caught up will there be romance between luna and the main character? also id also love a lyra to scritchy scratch any chance of pinkie octavia or vynil scratch show up?

7388576

No one's gotten that far yet, it seems :P

7388909

We'll see what kind of relationship develops between Luna and Ray, though they do have a lot in common and seem to connect on a deeper level than even Lyra and Ray. And though I can't say when they'd show up, you can expect the more renowned mane six and background ponies like the ones you mentioned showing up at some point eventually. :)

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I appreciate that users respect my right to what ever gunligon I choose.

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*looks up gunligon*

*Can't find anything on it*

*Makes it a sweet band name*

WE ARE THE GUNLIGONS
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*EXPLOSION*

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Gunligion is gun+religion
Glock fanboys are part of "Cult of the Glock" I'm more of a revolver guy, holy shit that is a good band name.

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GUNLIGON: THE GUN-HAVING

Now imagine the Glock has totally RIPPED muscle arms flexing out of its sides so its a gun showing off its guns. And the background is a volcano spewing chaingun bullets into the air while eagles with vulcan cannons strapped to their wings swoop down from the moon.

This is close:
i.imgur.com/6gIy07b.jpg

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