Vinyl Scratch reminisces about her University days where she spent more time with her friends Lyra, Octavia and Bon Bon. Now alone, she thinks about what was and what could have been. She follows the trail of memories and wishes she could alter them as she relives the events of her college years and tries to make sense of how things have changed.
She takes comfort in the memories of kind loyalty from her best friend Lyra Heartstrings, Lyra's adorable obsession with criminal justice major Bon Bon, and her first meetings with the love of her life, Octavia Melody...
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You might like this story if you also like:
Reminiscing about Better Days
Romantic Relationships
Lesbian Characters, Horse Characters, Lesbian Horse Characters
College Stories
Sexual Tension
Stream-of-Consciousness Thought in Written Form
The Ship "OctiScratch"
The Ship "LyraBon"
(Rated T for suggestive themes)
Will this story have any sex or sexy moments in it?
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Sexy moments? Oh yeah. :P
Sex? Perhaps implied, but never described. Maybe talked about in passing, but think PG-13 movie. :P
Fair question! I applaud your directness :)
>Citation for gratuitous ogling of Bon Bon’s Bun Buns.
…I'm stealing this.
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*Hands you Citation for stealing Citation for Ogling of Bon Bon's Bun Buns*
You can never win with these things. :P
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You should make the citation and post a pic of it :P
Thanks for reading the story! *hugs*
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this is one of the best stories i've read in my life. forget fanfics--stories. period. you perfectly captured the essence of memory in under 5,000 words.
i'm not sure if you would accept it, but i'd like to write a blog post about your story, if i may? i don't know if anyone reads my blogs these days but i want to share this gem of a creation because of how beautiful is it to me and how much it touched me. :)
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*super mega ULTRA hugs* Of COURSE you may write about it in your blog post! Heck yeah! That makes me super happy! Every little bit of exposure for this story helps!
And I'm so happy that this story touched your heart in such a wonderful way. I was crying while writing it because I was drawing from my own memories and then imagining what it would be like for these ponies to go through similar situations like I did. None of these events actually happened, but the feeling of those events during that time period in my life did. That university they're at? It's a real place. Anyone who went there would start to recognize it after all the descriptions I've given of it.
I look forward to writing more of this story and traveling down memory lane! You may write that blog post! Let me know in a PM when you do. I'd love to see it and comment on it :D *hugs*
Well...
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Really was a good story, I could even (to an extent) relate to Lyra in this story. I had some laughs, some cringing from the things Lyra had said to hit on Bon Bon. And near the end, well, things...... started getting hot... Bravo! Cant wait to see what the next chapter entails.
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Yay! I'm glad you liked it! That link isn't working on my end though :/ Has a gray circle with a line through it, which on deviantart usually means it's a mature work, but maybe it's blocked?
I really like the slow buildup of tension that happens with romance, though I don't see that often in movies. I think movies fail it more often than not. So I did it MUHSELF! :D
I look forward to coming back to this story and seeing what wonders I can add to the OctiScratch and Lyrabon :)
7320488 The image is from google+, its just a reference thingie. Its the uhh skyrim xp bar and the words above say "VinylxOctavia Increased to 78"
At any rate, I look forward to the next chapter.