• Member Since 8th May, 2012
  • offline last seen Jun 30th, 2012

TheRainbowdashLover!


Hi! Im TheRainbowdashLover! As you can see fav char RD,I'll try to make the best fanfics ever.

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Thanks to breaking laws,Dashie and fluttershy go to jail,But they meet up with somepony who almost ruined fluttershy's life.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 45 )

What is this I don't even.. :unsuresweetie:

All I have to say is get an editor. :twilightoops:

Sue

oh mah gawd dis iz so gud it shud git fetured

Your longest chapter is 300 bloody words...

This DID not need to be split up into 9 chapters!

Also, proof read before posting.

This is worse than my friend Kate's writing... And that's saying something.

OH DAMN. Jail, here we come!

Are you sure this isn't a troll fic? If you advertise it as one, more people will be understanding of it and its (no offense) badness. It's funny, actually.

I'm pretty sure I just read the whole story by reading the chapter titles.

What the hell did I just read? :rainbowhuh:

This story earns five Twilights... and not the good kind.
:twilightangry2: :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2:

This is undeniably a troll fic.

How the devil did this get approved?! :rainbowhuh:

XiF

Oh God, read this thing... Can't. Stop Laughing! :rainbowlaugh:

Am I high? Because this fic just made me laugh my ass off.

I will not read any piece with THAT many typos in the god damn DESCRIPTION. Sorry. :facehoof:

Congratulations. You just showed us the outline to a fic that MIGHT have been interesting. If this is your finished product, I can sum up my reaction in one picture:

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3 things that need to happen regardless:
-Expand on the idea
-Get a proofreader
-Read one of the many very good fics on this site or hit up EQD for some VERY good fanfics that will give you insight on how to properly write a story. I recommend Shipping and Handling, Fun with Changelings, A Slice of Life, Smoke and Mirrors, Antipodes, and Background Pony to name a few. The point is to get an idea of how proper stories are actually written.

I feel like I'm being trolled. Not by the writer, but by the mods. :facehoof:

I'm probably not even gonna read based on the reviews here.....:moustache:

Sorry,Im just not good at my fanfics..:fluttershysad:

Plus,I just randomly came up with this...Im a beginner.

Plus,I have no idea how i came up with this...I am sorry.

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* Sigh * If you didnt know,Im british. /:


Plus,Im editing it.

835148 OK, I think you may need some music therapy. I've got this!

dafuq? I mean seriously? Rainbow Dash told Fluttershy to break a law? and Fluttershy KINDa accepted it? And that lever? dafuq where did that lever come? someone constructed it? LOLOLOLOLOL :rainbowlaugh: This must be a trollfic... Cause if it's not then I am gonna go crazy over the physics... :pinkiecrazy:

Also,I told rainbow to break 50 laws with fluttershy,So i can get you guys revenge." <----- dafuq? Rainbow Dash ACTUALLY accepted it? OMG ROFL:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Oh and that teen pony? I am like :pinkiecrazy: now

Ok, Deep Breath, Deep Breath...

Ok that settled out.
My every single reactions while I was reading these: :ajbemused::applejackconfused::applejackunsure::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::rainbowlaugh::unsuresweetie::facehoof:

At first of all, I saw this... It was labeled "Dark" and I was like :pinkiegasp:
But then, I noticed that this WAS THE MOST FUNNY THING EVER!
EVEN WITH GORE! :rainbowlaugh:

WHO WAS FONE?

I am sure this is a trollfic...

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Oops. Ok I am REALLY REALLY REALLY sorry...
No-offense meant.
I didn't say those to criticize or make you feel bad so please don't take it the other way :twilightsmile:
It's just that... you really need to improvise the story...

I mean this story can become something really sad, gorish, but somehow beautiful romance...
But, Dafuq?

There is so much wrong with this. :unsuresweetie:
I'm not sure where to start.

just. no. JUST. NO. OKAY? JUST! NO!

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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