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Glittersparks tried her best to heal fluttershy and glida,But failed.
Everypony in the griffen world was sad for glida,Even if she wasnt nice,She was the best.
All of fluttershy's animals had to go in the everfree forest.
Fluttershy was dead,The main six felt very sad for fluttershy and dashie to be in jail,With so much pain.
Glida may have been rude,But everypony will reamber her.
Fluttershy may have been kinda short tempered,And shy...But she'll be reambered.
Fluttershy and dashie were prancing around,In deadville.
" Hey,Dashie? "
" Yes? "
" I LOVE YOU! "
She cried on dashie's hoof.
" Hey,It's ok."
She sniffed.
" Really? "
" Yeah,Because i had a crush on....Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! "
" Really!? YAHOO! "
They flew around deadville.
Even the ponies in ponyville didnt know what happened to them,Dashie and fluttershy would watch over everypony,Forever.
The end.
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All hail the butthurt you caused.
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Congratulations. You just showed us the outline to a fic that MIGHT have been interesting. If this is your finished product, I can sum up my reaction in one picture:
Image: http://denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw5129-fs-fuckingserious.png3 things that need to happen regardless:
-Expand on the idea
-Get a proofreader
-Read one of the many very good fics on this site or hit up EQD for some VERY good fanfics that will give you insight on how to properly write a story. I recommend Shipping and Handling, Fun with Changelings, A Slice of Life, Smoke and Mirrors, Antipodes, and Background Pony to name a few. The point is to get an idea of how proper stories are actually written.
Ok, Deep Breath, Deep Breath...
Ok that settled out.
My every single reactions while I was reading these: 
At first of all, I saw this... It was labeled "Dark" and I was like
But then, I noticed that this WAS THE MOST FUNNY THING EVER!
EVEN WITH GORE!
WHO WAS FONE?
I am sure this is a trollfic...
Oops. Ok I am REALLY REALLY REALLY sorry...
No-offense meant.
I didn't say those to criticize or make you feel bad so please don't take it the other way 
It's just that... you really need to improvise the story...
I mean this story can become something really sad, gorish, but somehow beautiful romance...
But, Dafuq?
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