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MoonShine 5266

Joined November 2011
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    MoonShine's Stories (5)


    The world of Lost Planet but on Equestria, the planet is EDN III (Equestrian dominated national), the world is lead by NEVEC the planet's military force, lead by General Celestia. The main opposing force is the snow pirates lead by their Star-commander Luna, the main characters are Nix (my friend's OC), Moonshine and Treacle Tart (My OC's) and the princesses.

    First Published
    20th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    16th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 34 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Goddamnit! Fina-Fucking-ly. A LP Crossover. Been waitin' been dreamin'.:yay:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>778454 Really, oh goody. I didn't know there wasn't one out. oh well, there you go, the next chapter will be out soon, hopefully.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Now for a rundown.

    A bit of a wall

    "Harmonizer" is misspelt a few times.

    Chrysalis is a broad line of species, there are Core-Chrysalis, Cyta-Chrysalis, and a few more. if you are referring to the akrid in the opening scene of LP2 then it would be a Core.

    a bit of a better description, make it easier for the non LP fan readers.

    Hope to see some Gordiant involvement here.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>778476 Oh right, I forget about the other types of Chrysalis, but yeah, it's the core one...and yes, I will try to get Gordiant into the story. And maybe Red-eye

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Cheerilee: Alright kids, who wants to climb inside the intestinal track of a giant alien?

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>778515 HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA!!! :rainbowlaugh:

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wait, art thou laughing at mine joke?:trollestia:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Ill just tell you that the kids who did, didn't get their cutie marks for it.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I have a cover idea. I need a picture of an empty Baylid, and a pony...

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>778538 Give me your email and I will try to get you one.

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    And a monkeyspider.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Im guesing the moon will take the place of N.E.O.S.?

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>778561 Umm.....I don't know, the moon could be.....the moon.

    And NEOS could be in orbit...like a, well, a spacestation.

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Well played.:moustache:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>778577 Thanks, BTW I sent you a pic, please accept it as a gift and also join chat :pinkiehappy:

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Done. and.... Done, erm, i think.

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #18 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Who disliked dis storeh?

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>778622 WHAT?!!! They will be sent to the moon and fed to the Akrids :twilightangry2:

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Brocakti time?

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I can't remember which one that is...they can be fed to the octopus-like Akrid.

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Eh, Ill merge the VS's myself.

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    NEOS should be the new facility for the friendship cannon

    Hate detected.

    H.A.R.M.O.N.Y. systems starting up.

    Generosity: Online

    Loyalty: Online

    Kindness: Online

    Laughter: Online

    Honesty: Online

    Magic: Online

    --Firing Orbital Friendship Cannon--

    --Standby--

    --Charging--

    --Firing--

    --Orbital Friendship Cannon Has been fired--

    --Powering down--

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>781050 Thank you for that, I might actually use that, may I?

    I really like it.

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Go ahead

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wait, is this still in year twelve of after trial era?

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>785290 Yes, all based on LP2

    #28 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Aw yeah, shit's about to get real.

    #29 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

    #30 · Chapter 3 · 42w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #31 · Chapter 5 · 31w, 15h ago · · ·
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    >>969630Please add AU tag.It is needed i think.

    #32 · Chapter 5 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1450920 A what tag?

    #33 · Chapter 5 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1455553Alternate Universe.

    #34 · Chapter 5 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1455575 Ok, done. Feel better?

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