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I am unsure what to put here.... TO BE CONTINUED!

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3 views 3 likes seems good. Also, First! Liked, Favorited, Loved. Will be featured. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Looks nice so far, all ponies are in character and nothing offensive or preachy. The only objection is that the chapter was way too short.

Oh, and it reminds me of this: Ponies × Book of Mormon – Hello

Nice read so far, waiting for more!

Too short. Looks good but the first chapter should really be long enough to establish setting and get into the action.

You smell that?
That's the upcoming shitstorm of people who do not consider religion a thing to joke about.
Please continue, I love those (the shitstorms, not the humorless) :raritystarry:

Far too early in the story for me to like or dislike it - I'm curious as to where this is going though...

778107 I LOVE THE BOOK OF MORMON!!!!!!!!! That's what mainly inspired this. New chapter should be out within an hour btw! :pinkiehappy: :derpytongue2:

Second Chapter's out and I'm really liking this story. it's fun to write and it's getting me excited for the future. A bit longer than the last, but no by much. Hope you all enjoy. :pinkiehappy:

Oh this is gonna be sooo rich. :rainbowkiss:
I'd have expected Twilight to ponder this a bit longer before asking the princesses.
Maybe this is her first run-in with this kind of problem? Because she made all the rookie mistakes.

Knowing Celestia, shell probably banish them all to the moon and Pinkie will just revert back to normal and abandon the religion to save herself.

And they all lived happily ever after.

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