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slightlyshade
Hugger of ponies and writer of words.
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This felt way longer than normal.
Damn this is just insanely good.
Disregard what i commented earlier. I've finished now.
This story had me think alot.
This gave me a lot of emotions and i found myself thinking ahead to what was going to come.
This doesn't feel like the end, but a beginning
+1. The feels erupt internally.
7280553 I'm weird like that. I just happened to have gotten engrossed in this one more.
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Okay, I'm just very chuffed you like it, but with this much positivity I'm almost uncomfortable! :D Not all the way though, so don't feel bad! Hah, thank you! I hope you like the ending too. It may or may not have ponies! ;3
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I'm so glad it touched you! Thank you so much for telling me - I really appreciate it! :3
(Also, cute Scootavatar. Scootaloo for life! :D)
How is Grace different from the ponies at school? She seems like an ordinary, hormonal teenage girl to me, with hooves.
Is it her disjointed thoughts? Because the narrative is all over the place here. Why doesn't the lollipop taste like raspberry? And then something about superheros? Why is it important that she didn't solve the math problem? It tumbles between specific scenes and general descriptions of time passing from paragraph to paragraph. Swear words being thrown in just to make it seem grittier?
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No lies, that sounds like a tale of a ferret and a laserpointer. :D
Regardless, you ask an important question right at the top there. If you are looking for an answer from me though, I'm certainly fine with answering questions about lollipops, but the actually relevant ones I should probably shy away from. Not going to tell anyone what to think unless it concerns trivial matters like swear words. These poor maligned creatures get people into trouble all the time.
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I bet I'm slower than either of you. It's a bit like drinking wine: my mind often doesn't permit me to just race ahead - more often than not it makes me go back and re-read a line and re-imagine the scene. No, don't just devour it! Perhaps faster readers can savour it just fine though, and there's nothing magical about being slow. :D