this was a pretty good first chapter, I'm hoping for more.

I'm typing the second chapter as we speak. Hopefully it'll be a bit longer this time.

Could you make a side chapter to say what happened before the portal? I'M COMPLETELY LOST HERE!

Patience, there will be one soon. Might be chapter 3. Just to keep you on edge.

Oh, don't forget to check out my bro's works, he's NinjaBob9001, does some Warhammer stuff.

Good news guys: This chapter is going to be significantly longer. Kinda good news: It'll a take a bit longer to type the rest of it, but it's coming a long fairly well and I'm getting close to the end! Staaaaaaay tuuuuuuuned~

Whoops, turns out its was around about the same length. Sorry there. Buuuuuut I'll try and make it longer for Chapter 3: The Part That Celestia Dies! (And yes, it will be named that. ) Keep an eye out folks!

So far, so good.

FAV THIS WITH A Vengence!

Chapter 3 is out with incredible speed! Though short, admittedly, but I couldn't make any longer with out having her walk and mope for DAAAAAYS on end. In compensation I've presented a challenge in the form of figuring out what the buck she's saying towards the end. Think you can figure out my super secret language? PM me if you think you got it, and you'll get a one time super secret faaaaaaabulous prize! Gooood luck folks!

nice. Don't know why there's a dislike though.

Probs a troll. Or someone who didn't really bother to read it all the way through.

Okay folks, Chapter 4 is on its way~! Hopefully Steve will be awake for the chapter...tune in to find out!

Huh? I didn't get it. Did she get killed, or did she die of a wavering immortality?

I guess I didn't explain it well enough, but then again I was kinda in a rush to finish the die story. Whoops. Celestia died while she held the portals open for the population of Equestria. Reality had been made nonexistant, and as a result, everything that could and couldn't have happened in Equestria, happened in the span of a nano second. The friction of the events and the speed at which they took place, added with unreality, caused an explosion ten times bigger than an igniting gas star, which was only enhanced further by the magic it once held. Celestia basically passed on her powers to Luna as soon as the population made it over on the other side, but the power was near too great for her, causing her to be blinded in one eye.

I'm liking this story! Good job!

Okay, Chapter for is fresh out of the oven. Shorter than the first two, but longer than the third. I think I'll dedicate Chapter five to the guys, and chapter six to the mane characters. Enjoy!

i hope they meet soon

Lol red shirt is HiLARIOUS XD

Looking foreward to where this is going1!1!!!

Great news everypony! I'll be slacking off a bit this week (again) and working tomorrow! Also, I'm prepping a new story called The Titanic: A World Out of Time! Set in an alternate universe during the year 1912 in an Earth-like Equestria! Plenty of sanity meters and Mr. Flappy Jaws-ish things will be found in the story (so in case you didn't get it: NOT FOR THE FAINT OF HEART). Plenty of guts, blood, and all sorts a fun stuff! Isn't that GREAT?

I love Minecraft!

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I'm gonna follow this (or 'favorite', if that's what you wanna call it)

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Aw 'tanks buddeh. I've been lazing off on Chapter Five, but I've already made a dent in it and...the new story coming up called The Titanic: A World Out of Time!!! Aren't you guys just EXCITED?!

Okay, after a few weeks of nonstop procrastinating and several all nighters of Binding of Isaac and RotMG, I'm going back into the saddle! I will hopefully be able to get the next chapter out by the end of this week, and I do apologize for the delay. Thank you all very much for reading my fic thus far!

Cant wait until they see herobrine or the enderdragon