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RogueShadow's Stories (7)

Scootaloo's School Diary Assignment
Cheerilee has given each pony in her class a journal assignment. What does Scootaloo have to say? What is Scoot's home life really like and how will it effect ponies how they see her when they find out if they ever do? What are her parents like?
11,005 words · 779 views · 57 likes · 2 dislikes
Stormy Night
What happens if a filly Twilight needs her big brother during a storm in Canterlot.
1,044 words · 1,112 views · 29 likes · 0 dislikes
Filly Dreams
She can't fly, but that doesn't stop her from dreaming of what it's like.
1,278 words · 374 views · 27 likes · 1 dislikes
Dear Dairy Series: Mane Six
What if all the Mane Six had a diary? What would it say?
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Dear Diary: Trixie
406 words · 477 views · 7 likes · 1 dislikes
The Hearth Warming Lesson
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Ruins
1,595 words · 272 views · 3 likes · 3 dislikes

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Filly Dreams by RogueShadow

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Sad Random Slice of Life

Other fillies and colts that are flying all around her that are her age. Some are even younger. She wishes to fly and wants to feel the wind in her mane. The time isn’t right for her to fly. No one takes her seriously or tells her to be careful. How does she feel with everything going on or is told? No one really bothers to ask the filly but she still runs the thoughts through her head in a mental diary.

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19th Jun 2012

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19th Jun 2012

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Tyler

#1 · 48w, 1d ago ·

Anything for bashing on Diamond Tiara is meh insta thumbs! :rainbowlaugh:

But in all in all divine story meh friend!

Bloodpool

#2 · 48w, 1d ago ·

It's ok, but it feels a little rushed for a diary... :applejackunsure:

RogueShadow

#3 · 48w, 1d ago ·

>>773733773733 yeah i was pretty tired when i wrote it.. i'm going to be fixing it here and there at a later date.

RogueShadow

#4 · 48w, 22h ago ·

>>773455773455 yeah i'm not a huge fan of diamond tiara and her friend silver spon. it's like they are always going to be stuck up. lol

TailsFox88

#5 · 48w, 20h ago ·

Short and sweet. I agree it feels a little rushed in some places, but I still really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. :scootangel:

watt savage

#6 · 48w, 5h ago ·

very good. it did feel rushed but it worked kinda for this story, anyway, good job.

keep readin' :eeyup:

Caneighdian Jake

#7 · 47w, 4d ago ·

Its a very good piece of work. There are a few grammar errors that kind of break the flow, such as "This I my right to have as a Pegasus...."

As for the rushed feel, I think it fits Scootaloo's character. Given her personality, I would think that she would write a diary entry with a "flow-of-consciousness" appoach instead of contemplating and ruminating about what to write down (that would be more like Twilight; only writing things down once they are all organized and outlined in her head). Your diary entry has that feel of someone writing down exactly what comes to their mind at the moment; different ideas, feelings, and thoughts are all intertwined together. I like it.

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