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M1SF0RTUNE 35031

Joined May 2012
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    M1SF0RTUNE's Stories (3)

    • The Price of Loyalty
      Everything was a lifeless, mundane, routine for the young glassy-eyed Lieutenant Ashen, a member of the Nightwing clan of Queen Luna's loyal nightbreed soldiers, until the night his home country was attacked. The prime suspect? Equestria.

      47,238 words · 228 views · 31 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Beyond Reach
      A short story of a writer who finally found inspiration, but cannot stop thinking about her.
      1,904 words · 154 views · 10 likes · 1 dislikes
    • A Writer's Inspiration
      A hopeful writer suffers writer's block, until a fateful meeting with a rainbow-maned pegasus.
      4,308 words · 212 views · 11 likes · 2 dislikes

    It took years for Quills to finally find the inspiration to write, but now that he has, he realizes the story he was creating has a lot more meaning for him, as well as the pegasus who inspired it.

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    This is the semi-sequel to my previous short story "A Writer's Inspiration," where I wanted to take another slice of life inspired from my own trials and tribulations as a writer, and just how much of an impact Rainbow Dash was to me just as much as she was to Quills.

    First Published
    20th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    20th Jun 2012

    Comments ( 7 )

    #1 · 52w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Awwww, so sad. :applecry:

    I was hoping there would have been more interaction between them, but this was really well written, just as good as the first.

    one little thing: you should try and make some sentences longer and include single sentences as well as complex ones.

    Other than that, I love it. :yay:

    #2 · 52w, 3h ago · · ·
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    >>779269 Thank you very much! :twilightsmile:

    #3 · 52w, 3h ago · · ·
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    What I wouldn't give for some criticism with those thumbs down instead of just the thumbs down :ajbemused:

    #4 · 52w, 2h ago · · ·
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    Very well written indeed, I could almost feel the emotions of Quills as I read this. As Sparkly said, try to make the sentences longer and don't be afraid to throw a few more complex ones in just to give it more detail and feel. Most importantly, like him, he hated that he, nor the hero he created, who fell in love with a pegasus and wanted to spend the rest of his days with her and live a happily ever after, would have a happy ending; an ending he didn’t know how to write. This right here was deep and I think this was a great way to end it. Bravo and thank you for a good read. Here, have a Rainbow Dash. :rainbowdetermined2:

    #5 · 52w, 1h ago · · ·
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    >>780168 There's actually a typo in that sentence. I just fixed it so it actually says "...wouldn't have a happy ending; an ending he didn't know how to write."

    I was so tired or something when I tried to write this part of the story... :twilightblush:

    #6 · 51w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Ah ouch. I'll talk to ya on Steam later, mate. :fluttercry:

    #7 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    A nice addition to the story thus far. I'm glad you're writing more for this character.

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