Awwww, so sad.

I was hoping there would have been more interaction between them, but this was really well written, just as good as the first.

one little thing: you should try and make some sentences longer and include single sentences as well as complex ones.

Other than that, I love it.

>>779269779269 Thank you very much!

What I wouldn't give for some criticism with those thumbs down instead of just the thumbs down

Very well written indeed, I could almost feel the emotions of Quills as I read this. As Sparkly said, try to make the sentences longer and don't be afraid to throw a few more complex ones in just to give it more detail and feel. Most importantly, like him, he hated that he, nor the hero he created, who fell in love with a pegasus and wanted to spend the rest of his days with her and live a happily ever after, would have a happy ending; an ending he didn’t know how to write. This right here was deep and I think this was a great way to end it. Bravo and thank you for a good read. Here, have a Rainbow Dash.

>>780168780168 There's actually a typo in that sentence. I just fixed it so it actually says "...wouldn't have a happy ending; an ending he didn't know how to write."

I was so tired or something when I tried to write this part of the story...

Ah ouch. I'll talk to ya on Steam later, mate.

A nice addition to the story thus far. I'm glad you're writing more for this character.