My name is William Donald, or it was before I ended up here, not that I really wanted to. Now I'm going by the name of Komodo and I'm looking for someone dear to me, but I can't save him when I don't even know where he is, or even where I am. I blame that damn old man that sent him here. If it wasn't for that strange lady, I wouldn't even be in the same world as him. I just hope Drew is alright, or else I'm gonna make that old man pay.
This is set in the same universe as Rust's "Ballad of Echo the Diamond Dog", Blackwing's "Griffin the Griffin", and many more. Welcome to the "Chess Games of the Gods." Hope you enjoy!
Also, fair warning: this is my first fan-fiction, so any good criticism would definitely help. Also, if you dis-like, could you PLEASE tell me what I need to work on? It would help me out really much!
MLP:FIM is owned by Hasbro (But of course, we already know that, now don't we.)
Thanks again to ShadowWeaver for the great cover picture of Komodo!
I F-ing love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i can picture the evolved two shield arm wielding, fire claw red dragon!!
total badassery
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thanks! I hope you keep enjoying this story
I like it, really clever with the song at the end. I've actually been trying to reword it for something but I'm just gonna have to scrap that idea now because this was much better than what I would have done with it
Knightmare: KOMODOOOOO! *Shifts to LAHIRE form and Overboosts to the cliff, spamming Grenade Cannons at the daemonig half-dragon monster* RAGNAROK! PREPARE TO DIE!
Oops, wrong song.
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Woot! Thanks. I was watching 'Doctor Who' when thinking of what to write, so I thought it would be a good idea
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Ragnarok: "So we meet again, Knightmare! I see you changed into that form again to avoid my geass again.That won't save you this time though, I'VE GROWN STRONGER!"
Bringing his scythe to the sky "Abyssus cado astrum." 'Hell's falling star' A meteor started to fall. "Let's see how you can save your precious Celestia now!" He said with madness in his eyes.
Audience: OHHHHH this is getting good!
863729 Knightmare: You mean HER? *points behind Ragnarok*
Ragnarok: THAT TRICK WON'T WORK TWICE!
Celestia: FIRE SALINE MISSILES!! *White Glint, piloted by Celestia, fires off two Saline spreader missiles at Ragnarok*
Ragnarok: ....fu-*Blasted*
Kngihtmare: Still a dumbass, and soon to be a DEAD DUMBASS!
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*" Picking himself up, he stared at the two machines in front of him. His only wing was broken and his right arm and side of his body was missing.
Ragnarok: *Cough Cough* Can't believe I feel for that twice. Stupid b*YAH
"BUT IT WON'T MATTER! I told you I'm stronger than before, so I can defiantly survive a few hundred of those missiles. The meteor is still falling on the battle field, and your precious machines won't have enough power to stop it. Your friend is dead, and soon this battle will be mine! Now if you excuse me...." Ragnarok said, picking himself up.
"I'm going to see a certain 'best pony' princess and see if I can still use my geass. Who knows, she might turn in on my side on her own free will. HAHAHAHAHA." With that, black flames erupted underneath his feet, engulfing him and soon he was gone, away from the descending meteor that was falling on the battle.
"Checkmate." Ragnarok's voice said in the air.
864010 Knightmare: *looks up to see the meteor....as the footbal-sized lump of rock floats down past his head* ..... That's it? *looks up again to see the sky MOSTLY clear, barring the aerial battles* ....Celly?
Celestia: Yeah?
Knightmare: Can I kill him....again?
Celestia: Please do.
[pleas note that I actually DO have a scene for this planned out and it involves Knightmare going COMPLETELY NUTZ on Ragnarok, lots of missiles get fired and the battle pretty much sends them flying clear across the battlefield repeatedly]
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Yah, I know this is just playing around. Don't want an actual battle to be in the comment section.
and I can't wait for that scene then. Should be pretty badass.
867269 'm gonna be doing my own 'Visions of the Future' bit soon, actually, and Ragnarok and Knightmare's brawl will be seen, albeit from the POV of the CMC....
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Sweet! Just keep Ragnarok in character a bit (psychopath), and I'll be happy as hell!
868449 I can do psychopath quite nicely.
But while pwoerful, he is NOT gonna be unstoppable.
Because, let's face it. Heroes always win.
Even if they're psychotic lunatics that wrecked the world.
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of course..... heroes always win......
Anyways, good luck with that!
Oh... Celly you are so very wrong for that.....
When did Trollestia join the game. [strike]I need to go find her and kick her ass. I don't know why.[/strike]
Nevermind. I'm gonna have a drink and some brain bleach
A whistling grey cynogriffin with a broom walked over to a crater forest. He shovels a few handfuls of dirt to slightly even out the hole. He then opens a portal to a burnt forest. There, he grinds some of the trees into a powder and spreads it across the field, acting as a fertilizer. He also up roots some tree stumps to make way for future generations. His work done, the Janitor sweeps some excess ash into a bag to find a buyer.
Soooo, Tia as two pieces according to this? Knightmare and this guy?
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I guess. Can't game master have more pieces? Not just one?
Also, that janitor thing....... Awesome!!!
*Rage mode activated*
*blinks*.............GUNDAM!!!!!!!!!!!
oh...wow...
Hmm, I really like this first chapter. You give him a good reason for going even while not knowing much about Equestria.
Only thing is the gods you used. Discord and Celestia is already taken, thus why most people tend to make up their own OC gods or simply choose a real one.
-Glassed
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From what I believe and heard, Game masters (the gods) can have only one chess pieces, BUT some gods *COUGHDISCORDCOUGH* don't listen to rules. And Celestia never actually said that SHE was the game master, just took pity on the Komodo and sent him to equestria. I'll explain more in the next chapter.... hopefully
The Aladdin song... I LOVE YOU!
Also,
That's the best damn description of Jack, I've ever heard
-Glassed
This story is AWESOME.
Noooo Drew!
I like Drew. He is a boss.
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Ungehorsam breaks that rule too. But only because he has a crush on Iris.
Oh
My
Fucking
Celestia
Damn
You
How
Is
It
Possible
To
Write
This
EPICLY?!!?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!??!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!????!!??!??!??
God, now I can't see that pony as anything other than a mouse!
-Glassed
Hard hat: Hat
A clock appeared briefly within the depths of the mine before returning to the 4th dimension.
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Thanks for that, missed it while looking through.
Why are so many dead? What happened in the caves? Just who is this mysterious colt? Find out next time on The Strength of a Brother's Bond!
Love this story mate.
I can edit for you if you want.
Also, amazing chapter as always!
1)...He's a native, right? Not human?
2) He pointed to my left back: the barkeep's When did you self-insert yourself, you sly bastard?
A silhouette of a unrecognizable being outlines on the unconscious griffin's body. "Great, now side characters are making messes."
Quick edit: Removed the song cause... it didn't feel right.... anywho, ALLONSY~
This reminds me, technically, the author is the true "one" god of whatever he/she writes about. Those dragon slayers, Komodo/William, Ava, etc, should all respect the almighty Trexorb. Echo, Daring Do, Ginger Snap, Coconut, Disarray, etc are under Rust, and so on.
PS: Faust is goddess of Equestria, but not this one anymore.
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well that was unexpected! I like this, keep it comin' man cuze you on fiya!
Give me an 'S'! Give me an 'I'! Give me a 'G'! Give me an 'M'! Give me an 'A'! What does that say?
SIGMA!
-Glassed
Man, can you build up some suspense.
...but what's up with the black-fire fists out of no-where though?
Dang son, that was some high falootin' ending words right there.
Quit trying to jump start my coal,,, erm, I mean heart.
Now that's what I'm talking about.
Must admit, things began to become deliciously dark near the end.
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Please don't teleport our hospitals to the moon again Although it would be fun.
why a Pegasus, there is more awesome creatures like
1. bat pony's
2. griffin's
3. changeling
4. dragon
5. manticore
6. cynogriffin
and there is still more then that. and if you do not now what a cynogriffin is then think of a winged wolf.
I like what you did there
Good story I like it in a side note does he have black dragon scales on his arms cause that's what it looks like