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AppleJTZ


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Based on the episode "Applejack's "Day" off"


While grateful her friends helped her streamline her working processes at the farm, Applejack is still shocked and embarrassed how it could even get so far with all the additional work that just wasn't necessary anymore. As she visits Rarity and watches her work for a while however, she realizes she isn't the only one who has problems with old habits...

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Comments ( 12 )

Yeah, old habits do die hard don't they?

I didn't catch that ending.

*laughs* I love this one!

7267572 Just Rarity having a moment of self-realisation :ajsmug:

A number of errors here and there, but otherwise a funny concept. Nice job.

7272372 Thanks :twilightsmile: I did write it in kind of a rush so it would be done before the episode was "outdated", so some mistakes might have slipped through proof-reading.

I know you intended this just as a funny little jaunt, but I've seen Rarity put through a lot of abuse in the fandom, and it feels like a one-up-manship between Rarity and AJ having the high ground here.

7306930 surely you just I mean most the pony analysis adore her.

Such a nice short story, that ending was the cherry on top ahah

Applejack and Rarity... a heavenly mismatch.

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