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Discharged
The Captain of the Lunar Battalion is Honorably Discharged for something he can't control.
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Romance Tragedy Adventure Slice of Life

"Today, I am being discharged from the Lunar Battalion......"

-Cpt. Crimson Moon Steelhooves (yeah, it's a mouthful)

The Captain of the Lunar Battalion is being discharged from service, plauged with a problem Equestria has not seen since the Pax Equestria. But thanks to the rise of Equestria's enimies, both foreign and internal, he is the first pony to experience it since before Nightmare Moon's banishment. He'll learn what friendships can do to a pony, what they can take and destroy, and what they can repair, throughout his journey into Ponyville's community and himself.

Rated teen for some violent/gory scenes of war, along with swearing and adult themes.

Chapter 1 · 18th Jun 2012

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Chapter 2 · 18th Jun 2012

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Chapter 3 · 3rd Dec 2012

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Chapter 4 · 19th Jun 2012

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Chapter 5 · 3rd Dec 2012

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Chapter 6 · 3rd Dec 2012

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Chapter 7 · 3rd Dec 2012

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Chapter 8 · 26th Jun 2012

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Chapter 9 · 6th Jul 2012

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Chapter 10 · 4th Dec 2012

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Chapter 11 · 4th Dec 2012

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Chapter 12 · 4th Dec 2012

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Chapter 13 · 6th Jul 2012

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Chapter 14 · 8th Jul 2012

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Chapter 15 · 4th Dec 2012

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Chapter 16 · 27th Jul 2012

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Chapter 17 · 22nd Aug 2012

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Chapter 18 · 23rd Aug 2012

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Chapter 19 · 24th Aug 2012

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Chapter 20 · 24th Aug 2012

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Chapter 21 · 26th Aug 2012

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Chapter 22 · 4th Dec 2012

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Chapter 23 · 11th Sep 2012

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Epilogue · 11th Sep 2012

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19th Jun 2012

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Phantompony

#1 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 4d ago ·

This deserves more views. I like it so far!

The_Last_Centurion

#2 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 3d ago ·

>>843605843605

Thanks! :twilightblush:

You'd be really surprised how many fics there are out there that are absoulutely amazing, but don't get a lot of views. I always love it when i find one, cause it's such a nice surprise. :heart:

There'll be more chapters ahead, and i hope it stays up to expectations!

Phantompony

#3 · Chapter 13 · 45w, 6d ago ·

5/5 moustaches :moustache:

Nice job! Looking forward to the next chapter already!

noseam

#4 · Chapter 16 · 39w, 2d ago ·

This story.

I'm in love with it.

You get all the mustaches or 20 because I seem to be limited.

:moustache:

Phantompony

#5 · Chapter 17 · 39w, 2d ago ·

Poor Crimson :fluttershysad:

Excellent update as usual! Will be looking forward to the next one again!

noseam

#6 · Chapter 17 · 39w, 1d ago ·

Tears they have been shed.

The_Last_Centurion

#7 · Chapter 18 · 39w, 1d ago ·

>>11403161140316

That's what I'm here for :moustache:

But don't worry, the story kida moves out of the super-sad zone in the next chapter or so.

Symphony

#8 · Chapter 24 · 36w, 3d ago ·

Just... Brilliant.

Image: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/81733307/tumblr_m0tl6gBtQ41qknie0.gif

Thestrangecaseofpaul

#9 · Chapter 24 · 36w, 3d ago ·

Why doesnt this fantastic story have more readers :pinkiegasp:

NightEyes_5

#10 · Chapter 24 · 36w, 2d ago ·

A good story overall, but the ending seems rushed. Feels like you got to the end and then just threw in the towel for the conclusion.

Darkheretic

#11 · Chapter 24 · 36w, 2d ago ·

How in the heck hasen't this gotten like 200+ up votes yet? this story is epic mate! keep up the awesome work I can't wait to read more of your stuff :pinkiehappy:

Phantompony

#12 · Chapter 24 · 36w, 1d ago ·

It's been a pretty good story I think. Definitely deserves more likes and reads! I'll try and send some feedback/constructive criticism when I can think of what to write, but for a first fanfic, NOT SO BAD! Good job! :pinkiehappy:

The_Last_Centurion

#13 · Chapter 24 · 36w, 7m ago ·

:pinkiesad2:

Thanks to everypony for all the praise and the feedback. I hope to see some of you guys reading some of my other stuff, but hay, you don't if you don't want to. Love you guys. :heart:

-The_Last_Centurion :moustache:

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