Whirlie Gears has wanted to fly like a pegasus ever since she was a foal, but that is no easy task for a unicorn. She's a blacksmith by trade, but fancies herself an arcane engineer. Setting out for Ponyville for a new beginning, will she become the first rocket-powered pony to take to the skies, or will her dream [literally] go down in flames?
[Portrait by AceSential (http://acesential.deviantart.com/) during the request livestream.]
Not bad. Not bad at all.
I like it so far. especially the part with derpy! haha!
SECUNDUS
optimus ad primus!!!!
I do hope Whirlie achieves flight. She kind of deserves it after all she's been through.
I appreciate the comments! Criticism is appreciated, too. This is my first time writing ANY fiction in probably 10 years...
Next chapter coming soon!
-Z
Leave it to Twilight to do something like that.
SECUNDUS!!!!!!
850832 latin?
IMO (yes)
852422 ahh. Haven't studied Latin since college. ;)
Reviewing done for now, so more time for ponies. Next chapter (hopefully) by the weekend!