Sweet Kiss

Spike came to see Rarity from a letter that was given. But Sweetie Belle was the one who send the letter to him, so she try's to kiss him to see her in a new light.

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MrBroniac

MrBroniac #1 · May 28th, 2016 · 1 · 9 ·

Another SpikeBelle? No thanks.

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MissedInTheNowhere

MissedInTheNowhere #3 · May 28th, 2016 · · ·

7253169 Why Not?

MaggotKing556

MaggotKing556 #4 · May 29th, 2016 · 2 · 1 ·

7253169 what's wrong with SpikeBelle shipping?

MaggotKing556

MaggotKing556 #5 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

Awwwww such a sweet story. While I prefer Spike getting with Rarity this was one I never thought of and it was good. Maybe cause I've only been a Brony a few months and we all have our prefered shippings I'm not apposed to new ones (at least new to me)

Regal_25

Regal_25 #6 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

The obvious complaint about this fic is the grammar: the tenses are mixed up in areas. So grabbing an editor to clean through would make for a much better read.

Story-wise? Not something we haven't seen before, but still a nice treat. It feels like more content could've been packed it, but I'm satsfied with the snack I got.

Keep on writing, m8.
Cheers

kyledenton