I got into mlp about a year ago, and I've loved it ever since! I've even gotten my friend, StarDancer1123 in it. I'm really excited to finally be a member!
This is my first submission so I hope you like it! Constructive criticism is appreciated! After a seemingly normal day for Pinkie, she wakes up to find out that her friends, including her whole town, hates her! Was it something she said? Was it something she sang? What did she do wrong...?
WARNING: SPOILER ALERT to anyone who hasn't watched the newest season 6 episodes!
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Thanks so much! I can't believe I already have 56 views already! I can't thank all of u enough!!
7250553 Ah, the gratitude of the newbie for a few dozen views...
So heartwarming...
So inspiring...
Shame the novelty wears off rather fast when they start to dry up, and no-one returns your calls...
Still, enjoy the initial rush while it lasts...
(Good story so far BTW)
Well gee thanks... SOO inspiring...
But anyway, thanks for the positive feedback!
Good start so far I want to see where this goes.
I actually started this chapter today! Do you think it was too soon? Anyway, I tried my best. Enjoy!
Hmm i am not sure i like the idea of anyone hating her. having this fear myself i find it uncomfortable to read no offense. I have anxiety of people not liking me and its a serious fear that can affect your life and trust in people. years of being bullied can do that to ya.
Aww, Pinkie
It was nice, though, seeing her and Diamond bond like that. 
7262494 awww I'm really sorry about that! I know how u feel, I've been bullied before too.
But don't worry, it won't go on for too much longer!
and there IS going to be a reason why this is happening, they aren't just hating her for no reason
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Okay thanks for understanding. is pinkie your fav? shes like my fourth favorite tied with applejack.
7262759 No, Fluttershy is my fav. Pinkie is second
can u tell I really like these mlp emojis?
Sound like Pinkie is in an alternate Ponyville, instead of the real one.
Oops, have I just revealed the big PLOT TWIST?! I hope not... That would kinda ruin the story, wouldn't it?
7263515 Don't worry! I kinda have the plot all planned out, but I haven't exactly figured out how I'm gonna do it. So, even if u r right, I doubt that I'm gonna do that. And it's OK to make suggestions, I'm just not gonna tell u if they're right or not
You know it's serious when Pinkie Pie starts thinking seriously!
I only noticed after I published that it's the same number of words as my last chapter! lol
So it's already almost been a month since my last chapter! Sheesh! I didn't mean for it to be that long really. I just had things to do, including going camping with my family.
So I spent a lot of time on this one, trying to make up for the last chapter, which was really crappy. I made sure to put in alot of detail. So if there was anything major that was bothering u, just let me know and I'll try to fix it! 
Enjoy!
7332216 hey it's been months since you made the fourth chapter, are you EVER gonna update the 'What happened to everypony...? ' story?
7861646 Sorry if ur upset about it! I was thinking of making another chapter but I honestly didn't think it was going anywhere. And plus, I didn't even know if people liked it or not, or how to make it better. Authors basically strive on feedback to let them know that their stories r actually GOOD, and I haven't gotten any of that since the first chapter
But if u want me to continue it, of course! I'll definitely find a way to make it good and enjoyable. But, right now I'm working on a whole new story, so u can read that when it comes out if u want
7861740 ok, oh and if you can, can you leave a line between sentences and paragraphs? had a little hard time following the story
7862658 A link between a sentence and a paragraph? I'm sorry, do u mean spacing them out a bit more?
7862737 yes. like this:
'Pinkie woke up the next morning, stretching her hoofs up and yawning so widely her mouth felt like it was stretched over most of her face. She looked around her room above Sugarcube Corner sleepily, then scratched herself with a hind leg like a dog. Pinkie looked out her window and saw the sun still pretty low in the sky, meaning it was still early in the morning. She suddenly gasped and grabbed her pet alligator Gummy on her bed and swung him around.
"Gummy! Guess what today is!!" Gummy looked back at her with unblinking purple eyes.
Pinkie giggled. "No, silly, it's not random holiday day! It's later! Do you know what that means?" She didn't wait for Gummy to "answer", "Dashie and I will finally do some pranks together! It's been SOOO long!!"
Pinkie set Gummy back down on her bed and kissed him lightly on his head. Then she hopped excitedly out of her room and out of Sugarcube Corner, not paying any attention on anypony around, just her fun-filled day before her. Pinkie suddenly saw Rainbow Dash out with Cloudchaser, a pegasus with a purple coat and a spiky white mane, and they were giggling together by an outside table, stealing glances up at Pinkie. Pinkie stopped before Rainbow Dash, confused.'
7862746 Oh ok. Thanks so much for the tip!! I'll be sure to do that!
Don't leave us hanging!