• Member Since 10th Jun, 2015
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kitten_girl86


Adult pega-sister who loves live action role play, mermaiding, writing stories and her cat. Active fan since saw very first episode via curiosity in 2014.

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A very long time ago, Queen Faust told a very young Princess Celestia a bed time story about something that happened a very, very long time ago.

A very short story I wrote some years ago that I've turned pony for your reading pleasure. (Short but too short to not reach the minimum 1000 words! :twilightoops: So i'm gonna have to make up some more story to go around the original. :twilightsmile: )

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Nice little read, though I'd change the Drama for a Mystery tag. Despite the story being a little sad in retrospective, it was heartwarming and enjoyable and I can imagine it being an episode about Celestia's youth :twilightsmile:

Just a thing about the info in the brackets - some can be let out ultimately - like "very pregnant" - it'll be a bigger surprise for the reader later :raritywink:, some should be replaced with dashes or commas and some - "aka jailer" - need a sentence or two of explanation than simple statement.
Also, please replace all the '&' with 'and' :derpytongue2:

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