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A short and sweet fairy-tale style story about the novice mage Twilight Sparkle of the Crystal Empire and her quest to retrieve the Lady Rarity from the clutches of an evil sorceress who has imprisoned her.


Entry for Monochromatic's RariTwi Contest/RariTwi Contest #4 This was back when the contest was undecided and doesn't count as an entry.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

good story, kind of hope that twilight and rarity are secretly dating without anyone knew. .but good story

7267450 But if they're secretly dating then I can't write Twilight quite as dorky...:twilightsheepish:

7267455 yess u could, it be while rarity like her so much.... or it could be both have crush on each other but twilight does not think she good enough while rarity think the same way.

anyway good story

RF2

It felt rushed and in my opinion, the ending was weak. Not much excitement and power. But it's cute and fluffy nonetheless.

7373077 I was going for cute and fluffy.

RF2

7385935 You finished quite nicely on that note, sure. I just felt like you could've done better.

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