He had lived in Ponyville for a long time, since the fall in fact. The Princesses had been nice to the bronies, allowing us residence in their world. The war could have been prevented, but the humans couldn't let go of their pride and accept the pony race. Celestia had been swift in their judgement, maybe a little too swift. the First mega spell hit Washington, after that, humanity seem to just slip away... Now Jack and the Mane six are being sent back to earth to look for survivors of the war, but what will they find?
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Ok, I'm going to have to agree with Norris on this one. It seems extremely ooc for humanity. 'Humans only' made no sense from any stand point. Even in stories where logic and disbelief is lowered. You still have to have some common sense. You are asking the reader, to belief that 100% of the human race except for bronies. Would allow the U.N. to act in such away. You are again, asking the reader to belief that 100% of the human leadership would accept peace from a sapient ET that has valuable resources, new energy, and knowledge. Only to turn around and pull humans only club for meetings.
Where deals are made and new laws are forged. That's a lot to ask of the reader, fully knowing your reader is human. They know what humans would do. They don't know what ponies would do, because that is an alien race. With a different culture, background, and knowledge.
Let's accept that the U.N. did a humans only. Well several countries would see that as an opportunity to show they are better. Those countries would do so to gain favoritism. To gain better access to resources and knowledge. Even then it wouldn't be just bronies that would be upset at that fact. A lot of people would be annoyed or even angered by such an action. Especially businesses and the scientific community. They would shut every access to the U.N. down. On top of that, the whole ponies only. Wouldn't lead to war, it would be something other countries would try to fix. While the rest stewed.
Basically what you are pointing to is the world nuking the ever living crap out of any isolationist country, just because they have a closed border. That makes no sense on any level.
But I'll say this Humans are evil trope can be played well. It just wasn't here or any of the other stories that were TCB. The reason? They tend to use the tropes. Humans are evil, humans are stupid, humans are weak. Which is a bad combo unless it's a parody.
7252778 thank you for at least reading it completely through before leaving a review. As for your statements, I meant this only as a story, I too know this of our race. Quite frankly, I am terrible at starting stories. when I write, I have a habit of skipping to the middle and not paying a whole lot of attention to the beginning details. Thank you for at least for not puking my work back up at me. I have been venting since I read the last one and just got back on here. It's nice to see some people still have a little respect here.
7701174 wow, that's just what I wanted to hear. The story's a flop, I get it, thought everybody had already seen that, but thank you for bringing it back up, a perfect way to end an already bad day.