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Whitestrake 53277

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    Whitestrake's Stories (5)

    • The Equestrian Bloodmoon
      When Hircine's Great Hunt fails, the Huntsman gets a proposition from Sanguine.

      69,779 words · 3,936 views · 310 likes · 12 dislikes
    • I Blame You
      The product of my friend and I having a Skype call that went to the subject of 'What if...'
      110,811 words · 6,622 views · 798 likes · 42 dislikes
    • The Brewing Storm
      Reman has returned to Nirn, and an entire nation's dreams follow.
      96,574 words · 1,438 views · 184 likes · 11 dislikes
    • I Blame You, Too
      The 41st Millenium is about to open a serious can of whoop-ass on Equestria.
      25,220 words · 928 views · 102 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Sub Sole Nihil Novum Est
      9,092 words · 184 views · 23 likes · 4 dislikes

    Sequel to The Equestrian Bloodmoon

    The gate to Nirn is open, permanently binding the realm to Equestria. In order to avoid the possibility of war with the Empire and the Aldmeri Dominion, Princess Celestia has enlisted the help of Reman, an Imperial. the mission is simple, and seems easy enough, but things rarely go as planned. With the enemies on all sides, each faction preparing for war, things are about to go from bad, to worse for all involved.

    First Published
    19th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    18th May 2013

    Comments ( 592 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Sequel to Equestrian Bloodmoon!?!?!?!?

    MUST READ.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Woohoo!! Looking forward to see where this one goes. Be careful though. I've seen more than one author try and make the ponies automatically badass enough to breeze through any challenge the other land/universe could bring forward. Usually ends up killing the fic for a lot of people.

    Anyway!

    Update soon! *completely ignores the hypocrisy of not having uploaded for a week.*

    Also look forward to seeing if Discord shows up.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>771449

    Discord+Sheogorath=:pinkiecrazy:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>771589

    We already know Sheogorath brought up Discord, but quite frankly I think a certain pony needs to get his daedric artifact.....no not the dang Fork of Horripilation!

    WABBAJACK!

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>771642

    *Looks at picture*

    *Dies*

    Anyways, I think we found out how Scootaloo got turned into a Sweet Roll, uh, I, uh, mean chicken!

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>771754 Better than the time in Oblivion I hit a deer and got a Daedroth. That was...not fun.

    What would one call a chicken turned daedroth? Scootadroth?

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>771774

    What about a Chicken-Daedroth-Sweet Roll-Septim?  Sickaeroll?  But then you add in Scootaloo...

    Scootasickaerollaloo?

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>771795 Now that's kinda stretching it. Either way, I wonder what other daedric princes might make an appearance...heck maybe an Aedra or something else entirely....like Sithis. :pinkiehappy:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>771805

    The Dragonborn's gunna have to get involved at somepoint.  I mean, practically everyone's playthrough features you becoming *SPOILER* Harbinger after Kodlak dies... oh wait a minute.  I just got a confluttershy.  Is written before the events of Skyrim?  Or has the Dragonborn just not done anything with the companions yet?  CONSPIRACY.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>771819 The Dovahkin is around. It was mentioned in Equestrian Bloodmoon that Remen had seen the remains of Helgen, which is why he doesn't trust Spike.

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>771827

    So he just hasn't f'd up the companions yet...  sigh... it would've been interesting for Reman to interact with a (presumed) lycan dovahkiin.  Well, that's a different story for a different time.  Though I would love to see the Dragonborn's reaction to Spike, or just everything.  Though the space core is probably the weirdest thing he/she will ever encounter.  So, yeah.  Talking Ponies vs.  Magic Robot from SPAAAAAAACE.   Just about a tie.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    wait, gates from nirn to equestria? that would make Equestria a daedric realm! the only question, who's realm is it? did they miss a daedric/aedric god?

    And who is the God(s) of the realm? celestia, luna or even someone else?

    what the the... :rainbowhuh: this even start to make sense :pinkiegasp:

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 13h ago · · ·
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    >>771805

    Sithis?

    That would be sweet.

    He just pops up looking like his statue in Deepscorn Hollow.

    "Sup".

    And then everyone dies.

    ..............................

    Other than that, we will probably see more of Talos, as apparently he blessed Reman.

    Want to see Sheo and Haskill, even Jyggalag. He never gets enough love.

    I'm sure Azura would be nice if they met her.

    Sanguine would be his drunken trollish self.

    Dagon will be like "Dafuq is dis shit? GTFO OR DIE!"

    Malacath? Unless they befriend the Orcs, don't see him showing up.

    Meridia might show an interest; if I recall, she is one of the "nicer" ones along with Azura.

    Boethia? He/she probably wants nothing to do with them.

    They already have an Aspect of Hircine in Equestria; I wonder what his followers in Nirn will do?

    Hermaeus Mora? Twilight would immediately try to summon him and seek out the Oghma Infinium. I hope it works.

    OF COURSE, THIS IS ALL SPECULATION.

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 13h ago · · ·
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    A wild sequel appears. Fellow author Crackshot uses read.

    It's super effective.

    Sequel uses Being Awesome.

    It's super effective.

    Fellow author Crackshot has fainted.

    *Edit*........... Not sure why I did that, but yeah, nice to see a sequel up.

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 12h ago · · ·
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    >>774370 Oh Lord. Twlight meeting Hermaeus Mora would be freaking hilarious

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh snap, slaughterfish.

    Cue "JAWS" theme.

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    No matter how you put it slaughterfish are fugly and mean.

    Both the Oblivion version:

    And the Skyrim version are nasty.

    ......Heh, watch it turn out to be one of these:

    I pinch.

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>780016Whoa, watch out for the clamps, man, I don't need the Robo-Mudcrab Mafia on my ass.

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #20 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>780026 The clamps! Or clamp-like objects.

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>780026 Just carry a nutcracker and some melted butter and they'll leave you alone.

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>780094That was the greatest comment ever made

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>780098

    Mudcrab mating season.  You don't wanna f**k with those mean bastards during mating season, man.  'Specially the breakdancing ones.  I hear they can do Coffee Grinders of Doom, man.  And then there's the armored ones...  

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Hmmm.....

    Slaughterfish attack?

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>780098 I got a similar comment from someone who'd posted a vid of a giant enemy crab from Monster Hunter 3. Apparently applying melted butter and lemon to the sword = massive damage.

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    'Even if she had to carry a thousand pounds across a thousand miles, Rarity would not be denied her chance!'

    I did that once. the result was that when I crouched, I couldn't get back up.

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Well this is going to be a mild inconvenience at best.

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Awesome, can't wait to see where this'll lead.:twilightsmile:

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh my GOSH!!! I haven't played Skyrim yet, but I really want to, and this is freaking making me excited!

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>780016

    WHO WANTS SUSHI!?

    #31 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>780094

    And an Eastern Asian cook. Specifically a sushi chef, though there aren't any Eastern Asians in Skyrim :C.

    #32 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I can't wait for them to meet the other Daedra.

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Just out of curiousity. Are you going to try to update this on a scheldual? Or just posting chapters when they're ready?

    #34 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>783020I'll be posting chapters when the next one is nearly done.

    Next chapter = Complete

    Next next chapter = 1/14 done

    Regardless, I'll be putting one up on Dawnguard's release date, and Season 3's premier date

    #35 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>783035

    Oh, damn. You're booking it on this story (Ha! puns, sorry couldn't help myself :ajsleepy:). Not going to complain about that. :trollestia: I've been loving what I've seen of it so far. I mean ponies in Skyrim? What's not too love? Good work, man. :twilightsmile:

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Put the Dovakiin in there, seriously, have him wearing Daedric armour o they freak out and attack him, who doesn't want to see the elements vs. a FUS RO DAH.

    #37 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>780060 Where in the hell is THAT???

    #38 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: its a horker.:rainbowdetermined2:

    #39 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>783288

    It was in the Skyrim Game Jam video.

    #40 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #41 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    No mudcrab? Might just be because of the tophat mod for them but I just find them damn amusing.

    #42 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wait... Glade started vomiting? O-O Morning Sickness? Because as I recall, she and Reman got a bit... Frisky... Reman, if what I think is happening is happening... You should have taken precautions, you silly lycan. Or maybe it was just disease from the Slaughterfish bite. There's all sorts of bacteria in their saliva.

    #43 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Does Glade have a disease then?  Aren't werewolves supposed to be immune to all diseases?  Or is it a poison, in which case, where did she get it?

    Can't wait for more!

    Having just now read the comment above, I realise that suggestion is far more likely.

    Silly, tired brain.  Go sleep or something.

    #45 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    can't wait for the next chapter.

    #46 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>799931

    You can catch diseased from those snapperfish or w/e the hell they're called... damn things gave me all sorts of diseases...

    All in all, she's probably pregnant... sigh. Didn't her parents give her The Talk and to use protection? I'm pretty sure those mages at the College of Winterhold have a hand spell or two for such activities :|.

    #47 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ooops:twilightoops:

    #48 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I pray to god it's not pregnancy because quite frankly the level of stupidity coming from that would drop a moose. I'd rather see the werewolve's immunity to disease take a hit than to have freaking pregnancy.

    Oh and make sure to have at least one scene where the ponies meet an orsimer. With the orc's love of horseflesh, it would be hilarious.

    #50 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I find the possibility of pregnancy ridiculous. It's absolutely impossible for humanoids and non-humanoids to produce offspring. They're just too different.

    ...unless a Divine or Daedra got involved. That possibility just occured to me.

    #51 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>800015 Slaughterfish, and when you're pretty sure you're about to die, that line you set for yourself to not cross gets a little fuzzy.

    #52 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>800529 I'm wondering just how many Daedra woulda had a hold in that.

    But I believe she is preggers. A lycan human and a lycan Pegasus....Gonna be one damn furry baby.

    #53 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This might be Azuras revenge.

    #54 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>800725

    I remember my first slaughterfish...

    *jumps off of Throat of the World and somehow lives while falling into a river*

    Wow, that was c- *slaughtered*

    #55 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>771805 Psst. Hey, I know who you are. Hail Sithis.

    I don't know why I do, but I can't help but laugh every time I hear a guard (specifically a male guard, sorry ladies) say this line to me.

    #56 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This makes me feel guilty for starting that new save file on skyrim, and accidently deleting my complete first one. Oh well, might just go back to it at some point. Keep going! This is gonna be epic!:yay:

    #57 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    *Claps Slowly*

    #58 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>803953About what?

    #59 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>803958

    Your writing.

    #60 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>803964The slow clap means it's either good, or bad.

    For the love of any deity of your choice, tell me!

    #61 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Shit just got real.

    #62 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>803974

    I prefer Talos, thank you very much.   And why would I have read up to chapter 4 if I disliked it?

    #63 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>803986As I have said, I've never thought highly of my writing, and always seek to improve.

    I was under the interpretation that a slow clap generally means disapproval.

    #64 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Family matters... meh. They're a bitch to deal with... especially with hints at Glade's condition...

    That'll be fun to watch be explained.

    #65 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>803996

    Oh, derp.  I've been under the impression that a slow clap means aprroval beyond disbelief.  Like, unable to clap faster-awe.  Whatever, I think you're great.

    #66 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>804004Oh, in that case, thank you

    #67 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #68 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>804004 Here's one example of a slow clap being bad.

    #69 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    *activates sing song voice*

    i know why glades iiiiii-ill

    shes preeee-gnant

    *deactivate voice*

    .....i like where this is going if im right. oh boy its going to be hilarious if its true and when lynette and remans family find out he fucked and impregnated a talking pony or in their eyes a talking horse. lol

    #70 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    oh man they should see a mage fight next .... you know ice v fire or whatever.

    #71 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Was that the Dragonborn? Why did they stop when he didn't use a shout? And please don't tell me the language of the Dovah can be understood by the Equestrians.

    #72 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>804271It wasn't, that was Uriel, Reman's brother (Twin, if you recall) using the Voice of the Emperor to stop the combat

    #73 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    .......Did you name him Uriel based off the Archangel or something else?

    #74 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>804503No, Reman's family is based on names from Tamriellic heroes, or Roman history.

    Uriel was a previous emperor (seven or eight emperors, actually)

    Wait, there's an archangel named Uriel?

    #75 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>804515 Yep. Name means "Light of God"

    #76 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>800529

    You. Sir/Madam. This might be Azura's revenge. I just realized that as soon as I read another commenter's comment. It makes sense, really.

    Also, IF Glade is preggers, I'll have to say, I saw it coming. As soon as Celestia revealed ponies could reproduce at any time, I thought, 'Glades gonna be pregnant isn't she. Oops. Reman, you silly lycan, you!'

    #77 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hmm, things are getting interesting.

    #78 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I wonder if the ponies will be pulled into the war.

    #79 · Chapter 4 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Looks like I'd better hurry up and finish Skyrim. It'll help me understand the story more when it passes the point I've reached, and it will avoid spoilers from coming out of this story.

    #80 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    And that kids, is why you don't fight Zombies with fire!

    #81 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    im assuming learning spells would work differently in this version of skyrim. Reman mentioned he had a bunch of money holed up and could probs afford to buy a few low level books at least. even if he lost his magicka levels too, knowing Flames/Frostbite/Sparks would be a great help to him.

    #82 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>811584In this universe, you have to be taught the spell by the person teaching it, and the time it takes to learn it varies.

    It goes much faster if you pay the instructor to teach it to you in its entirety, but you can practice on your own.

    The time also varies for each person and their respective talents.

    It would literally take three months of constant studying to get him back to where he was.

    #83 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Never EVER set a zombie/draugr on fire. There's nothing worse than a zombie... other than a FLAMING zombie.

    #84 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    So when in game time does this take place, before or after the attack on Kindsgrove?

    #85 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>811718Given that travel takes considerable time in this universe, the Dovahkiin is about to reach High Hrothgar for the first time.

    #86 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    one word SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE

    #87 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>811727 With that in mind, I imagine the ponies will likely encounter Mirmulnir's skeleton. That should be humorous. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

    Also there needs to be a scene with ponies and orsimer. Mainly because the Orcs love horse flesh.

    #88 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    will the ponies get to see the dovahkin in action, you know shouts and all?:raritystarry:

    #89 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 8h ago · · ·
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    >>811704 There is a reason for why you pour gasoline on yourself and put yourself on fire when facing ninjas. Not even great warriors like ninjas can catch you if you are on fire.

    #90 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 6h ago · · ·
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    >>816913

    That's what happens whenever I fire any weapon on any FPS game. My character bursts into flames and my inner TF2 Pyro breaks out, dominating any foolish mortals who get in my way. MWUAHAHAHAHA!

    #91 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A challenger appears to rival Glade...

    What will happen?

    #92 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    So we have ponies, lycan ponies, lycans, and a lycan hunter.

    Who else could see this as a romantic comedy?

    #93 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>832004Wait until you meet the rest of the cast

    #94 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    lol keep'em comin!!

    #95 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>832004  I lol'd

    #96 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Good Lord. For four legged beings the ponies are moving really slow. How's Dawnguard BTW?

    #97 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>833451Pretty sweet, but the number of options has me making new characters left and right, and I glitched up and have the vampire cure quest(The normal one) permanently active.

    Besides that, it's good.

    #98 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Almost maxed the lycan tree myself

    gonna take a shot in the dark and say

    the Dragonborn eventually joins the party

    #99 · Chapter 7 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I has dawn guard advertisement on screen.

    #100 · Chapter 7 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    man, you tell them to wait for a signal ....but you dont have one???:rainbowhuh:

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