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Okay, now that's a start. Not sure if I'll get invested in this story, given you and your lengthy update times but I'll keep an eye out.
9724295 I'll see what I can do about updating this more regularly.
I like the start of this one. Looking forward to more.
9727055 Glad you liked it, I am working on the next chapter.
Okay, firstly, the course scene. Reminded of a twisted version of Judy Hopp's course run in Zootopia's police academy. Gives me a good idea of just how much racism there actually is in the so-called perfect 'Steel Rangers' Then there was this.
Legitimately got chills from this guy. As interesting as it is to see the perspective of what are technically some of the biggest bastards in the Wasteland outside the Enclave... I still don't have to like it and yet I do at the same time. You know?
Yep, definitely Zootopia. Replace the token bunny with the token Unicorn and you're golden.
...Oh, I am going to feel sorry for her when she finds out the truth. Great chapter Ruin.
9735257 Admittedly, any parallels to Zootopia are coincidental as I still have not seen that movie. But still, interesting parallel.
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You poor soul. Really great film about racism and the like.
9735291 Oh I want to see it, but I haven't made the time.
Nice start to a story. Looking forward to more.
9767402 I’m working on it.
Honestly I should have rebooted this fic already, not sure why it didn’t occur to me before
And through the force, my chains shall... Sorry, wrong franchise. Still, Nova and Finn can relate. Also, was that ghostly bacon haired mare who I think I was...?
Fitting insert song by the way.
10003688 Heh, so true they definitely can.
And no that wasn't who you think it was, that's sort of a preview for something yet to come in the story. It'll make sense when we get to it.
Nice update
10046461 Thanks.
I will be honest Rach, this chapter felt like filler. Like, it really did. I'm sorry, but it did. It just wasn't all that interesting.
I liked this chapter overall. While some may see it as filler, to me you are laying the foundation for more of the story to come. Now she is out in the Wastelands, she is starting to make allies and maybe friends. She has an encounter that suggest future hostilities that she could become enmeshed with. Yep the first two chapters showed who she was and how she got to this point, this says there are possibilities and possible consequences to be had.
Liked the update. Still on my read list. As for it being seen as filler; not all chapters have be action, some exist to fill in story or bridge the story. Keep up the good work! 😁