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This would benefit from another round of proofreading, but the content is sound. It can really hurt to not get what you want.

I can't think of any better description for this other than "yes".

This is a really great story, happy endings are far to overused in my opinion.

I'm not a particular fan of shipping, but this was well executed. Good job!

Poor Rarity... :raritycry:

Beautiful writing! I loved this story!

Maybe this would be a better picture. It has Rarity faking a smile, while Fluttershy is sad. This could be the scene where Fluttershy asks Rarity if she is okay and Rarity just smiles.
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http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130720012560/mlp/images/2/23/Rarity_and_sad_Fluttershy_S1E20.png

Lovely descriptions and well-captured emotions.

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Cheers mate glad you liked it.

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