• Member Since 23rd Apr, 2012
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Lucario247


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Most ponies would see it as a gift to be able to breathe fire. But, for Wisp, it's a tortuous curse. For her, the flame that she inherited from her dragon father is an impossible burden. To hide her ability, Wisp takes up the job of "Fire dancer".

"If fire could not burn you, would you bathe in its heat, or turn from its light?"

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Comments ( 32 )

Quite interesting. Bit of a grammar stuff here and there, but I'd like to see what goes on with this! :ajsmug:

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I haven't seen a good pony-with-supernatural-abilities fic ever. You just fit the bill. Allow me to continue with what I started:
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I really like this, but Wisp's real dad is a real asshole, I mean she just got a date, then he takes her away from the only life she knew.

790521 You've still got an o where the p should be LOL

790524 Fuck my finger must of sliped, it happends a lot and I'm not making that bit up.

790534 Thanks, now I want to fic for a new OC, I'm to one of my fics,.

790400
Ya. I'm not the best at grammar stuff. I'll have to look it over and hand it over to my editor.
790423
Hee. Your comment made me smile. :pinkiesmile::heart:
790455
I'm getting to that part where Wisp and Ragnarok have some character developement. If what I'm planning for the future comes true, the asshole-ness should slowly dissolve.

791206 Well thats good to here, I mean who would want an asshole for a dad, cause I know my one is being one right now.

791256
True dat. I don't want to give to much away, but I might have to add a romance tag later. Cause I might add a love interest in. :derpytongue2:

People who don't like romance fics: No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:fluttershbad::raritydespair::pinkiegasp:

Yes! Mwahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh:

791206 You're welcome. You are truly good at this, and if you need a grammar nazi, contact me. :twilightsmile:

791293 It'll be nice for her to have a lover, sort of tring to get my RP on PonySqaure a lover, and so far, have failed lol.

791326
Don't mention it. I might take you up with that offer. Maybe. I'll have to check with my current editor.
791327
I'll have to read that story. If all goes according to plan there should be epic fight scenes, romantic moonlit scenes, and lots of stuff between wisp and Ragnarok. I might have to replace the sad tag with slice-o-life

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:rainbowderp::rainbowhuh:
Meh. What the hell...
:derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy:
I have no idea wat you're talking about

Pretty good I like it:pinkiehappy:

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I'm liking where this is going so far

807411
You'll see! Mwahahaha! :pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh:

Unfortunately, productivity rating is going down this week cuz I'm doing something for my church all week. I'll still be able to work, just not as much as I'd want to.

My reactions reading this:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowderp::twilightoops::rainbowhuh::ajbemused::unsuresweetie::facehoof:

You have a few spieling errors, but could I iron them out for you?

834876
I guess you could, but you're going to have to tell me how you're going to do that.
834887
That's good. I just thought that you weren't because of the emoticons.

839800 A simple copy-paste and I could send it to you via PM

845347
Ive never thought of it that way. Sure, go right ahead!

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