I see people two ways who they are and who they can be.
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What happens when Princess Celestia finds an infant in the Everfree forest.
With the infant is the body of a strange female creature holding a large folder of notes.
Deciding to raise it as her own.Does she (A) Give it love and teach it all life is precious
(B)hide it away from everyone
(C) Give and teach it love but train it to be a defender, not a destroyer.
Let's just hope she chooses the right one.
The gore tag is for light gore and sex tag is for situations, and innuendos.
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Hmm...
Hmm.. indeed.
Despite the numerous typos, and rushed story, it still drew me in. I liked it, though I won't give it a thumbs up quite yet. I'll give it a few chapters.
I assume the sex tag was added because she will (udder-breast) feed him, though I don't understand if putting a sex tag on something for just breastfeeding is right. It has nothing to do with sex.
The sex tag is for the language and innuendos possibly some lite sex descriptions. Nothing to heavy just lite stuff maybe so petting , cuddling but no hard core sex.
I would like to point out she picked up "the blanket RAPED baby".
Sometimes typos can make a good story into an acid trip, and I love it.
I love this so much!
also, yeah nice blueblood in the future.
This is cool
This is good!
The Name changed from Celestia Everfree (what the scientist said) to Morningstar.
If she was using a fake name to be in the facility, it's not brought up like that.
Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
8152432 Later chapters will have blood, evisceration, partial to full decapitation but it only happens when Darwin is protecting a loved one. You have to remember he was created as a weapon so killing things will happen.
BABYHEMOTH!!!!
I've kept this out of my favourites folder until I could work out what the cover-art creature looked like that was familiar, and I have it!!!
Final Fantasy, Behemoth young, or Babyhemoths as they are known, have horns and are small enough that a human in their early-to-mid teens (I'm guessing at the age of the two from World of Final Fantasy) can safely and comfortably carry one around on top of their heads.
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What a heartbreaking performance I feel like crying cuz of how good this is.
Please keep going.
You might want to change that, because it's quite frankly absurd.
Drop it down to twenty or thirty.
Is not imposible for a poison to be that strong. Ive heard of poisons that could do the same and remember his a hybrid so who know how strong his poison could be.
8209785 A single drop of the inland taipan's venom can kill 200,000 mice or 55 adult humans but you must remember that Darwin was genetically engineered to be the perfect weapon also I have chosen this scale of measurement for the ponies in this story.
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8210451 Yes, but Inland Taipan venom works by clotting the blood and is incredibly difficult to fid traces of in the bloodstream because of this.
That said, there is no man-made poison or toxin that can kill as efficiently as the venoms of Taipans or even Browns.
depending on what you do, I can enjoy a nice Blueblood.
Did they not told the prince or the princess about those important informations?
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Yes but he is a hybrid of predators know from both human and equestrians, so who knows what kinda of fantasy animal was merged with the prince to give him that level of potent poison.
the dawws are OVER 9000
i believe you forgot a word in that sentence
of it wouldn't be Luna I would pray for a quick end, I just hope the adventure part isn't going to overshadow everything else like the family bonding.
i think you meant hurt not hunt
Why dose blueblood a mare in the picture
YEE-HAW another chapter, praise the lord!
How odd to read that Blueblood is almost decent.
Good on you for bringing in the Lullaby for a Princess.
"the blanket raped child"
Uh sir we have a blanket that rapes children.
Other than that typo great story so far
" News flash in this story Prince Blueblood is not an Asshole surprising he is a nice guy "
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what about black mombas?
Want more please!! Will give cookie for new chapter and cake
IT'S ALIVE
is this what the snake looks like?upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/f/f9/Elapidae_-_Ophiophagus_hannah.JPG/170px-Elapidae_-_Ophiophagus_hannah.JPG
Darwin certainly gets along well with the ladies! I can't wait to see how future relationships with Gabby and Ember go for him! But catching a striking snake that can even move faster than Celestia's magic is pretty impressive! Just make him loose at some point so he's not a boring invincible character.
might want to go through that again and edit a lot of spelling mistakes mostly Celestia being called Tai
Ayye it still lives. Good to see.
So sweet
is darwin going to have a harem?
I get the bad feeling Spike and the others are older here and Spike x Rarity is a thing.
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh now I remember, I think Twilight just got to be Celestias student right?
Is gabby a griffon from the show?
Well not sure who is going to be his lady later (I hope there aren't going to be more than those two or one of them, but I would like to see some of the species you don't see to often in a romance story, that would probably be a minotaur and I haven't seen Ember in a romance story that often either.
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I think he could just work with a situation in which it isn't enough to be a born weapon like when someone is poisened or when he can't rescue everyone.
I agree with what you are saying but I don't need another story in which the main char can beat someone like Celestia, but it loosing against someone barely stronger than a bird.
I remember a story in which the main char was described as strong as Celestia or someone like that and then he had a hard time against Blueblood.......
That is why I suggest to have some certain situations rather than many enemies that could beat him because I fear that maybe ends up looking weird instead of good if he is meant to be the war maschine that I remember.
I'll quit being a fan of mlp if this story is canceled or not updated.
Total rugrats situation going on were the baby’s speak there own language
extensive wombs ?
She will make a great mom.
Welp whoever put the snake there is f@^%ed.
I really like this story i really want to know how this turns out in the end
Please continue making this story
Given his connection to animals it would’ve been awesome if Darwin started speaking parseltongue like Harry Potter.
MORE PLEASE!!