An In-no-sense Innocent Short Story.
Sometimes the enemy is more devious than you think.
Trickery and treachery go hoof in hoof, change always results.
Somethings, like allegiances, can be changed back.
Others.... others can't.
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More randomness from the back of my head to the front of your screen!
Depending on how this is recieved I might end up continuing it.
Supply and demand.
Yeah the chapters are short.I just couldn't make them any longer with out making them ramble. on and on and on.
I think I could probably get Nerves into the 1.5k word mark if I pushed it,maybe missed the time skip for a few insert conversations.
Not "perked my interest" but "piqued my interest".
Yes! more Changeling Twilight stories! Soon they will outnumber Alicorn Twilight stories!
Ahem, disregard that.
I really liked it. And the cover image is awesome too.
A story that involves changelings but isnt dark and filled with gore and uber-changelings dominating over other species?
Blasphemy
Pretty interesting, tracking in case you decide to write more.
Moar...
844810 I have one to XD I planned it right after the Royal Wedding came out :)
Please do continue!
Where is this supposed take take place? When is this supposed to take place?
I was a tad sceptical reading the first chapter, but you good sir have won me over.
Have a like, a fave and a happy reader. Please do continue.
Well, I'm liking it so far, and I hope you write more!
844810 No complaints I enjoy both!!!!
Please sir, can i have some MOAR.
Please continue.
This plan can only end well, I'm sure of it
also, we need a Liarjack emoticon.
Anyway, can't wait till next chapter
COME ON!!! Great story but it is so~ short! It takes like a week for a new chp for 700 worded chp why are you having short chps?
994176 Patience my good colt.
This is not my main project here on this site.I only write for this when I get stuck on Ponysona or Mysterious Mare Do Well.
And i only get time for writing when the rp group I'm in finds a calm point.
And the reason this is such a short grouping of chapters is because they just are.I won't force a chapter to keep going if I don't think I can.I find good stop points and I use them.
This has been niggling at the back of my head for... quite a while now.
so fine.I guess I'll continue it.
As much as i am ashamed of this story for how bad it is compared to some of my other ones (though it's not as bad as Armored Core fore Pony.Sheesh,I totally dropped the ball on that one.). It's one I can update regularly because it's chapters are small.
So yeah.Uncancelled.
Wait it was cancelled
well at least you're still writing it 
Yay!
This is very excellent!
YAY ITS UNCANCELED!!!!! i take back saying you are a douchebag
OOhhhh!
Sumpins going down at the palace
844810
Hear, Hear!!
If she's a changeling, why doesn't she just give misinformation on how to spot one.
Yeah, really thin slices of life...
Keep going! ;)
Update regularly my ass!!
Those slices of life are too thin.... And there's not enough of them.
Great story. The vylin seams to be a changling changling hunter. (*yes a changling who hunts changlings*). And this is a allaround great story.
If you're still writing it then how come there hasn't been a new chapter for a year and a half?
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UNCANCEL THIS THIS SEEMS INTRESTING AND I'M NEED FOR MY CUROSITY TO BE GONE!!!! (I know the last part makes no sense but that is just me and my typing
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I love this story
hope to see more in the future
Wait canceled.... u know I can give u some ideas at idea helper if u want.
Damit cliffhanger
OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH SNAP!
And then a guard killed her on reflex so the story is cancel
Good story too bad it's canceled still.