Twilight Sparkle gets pregnant, but won't reveal the father; rather, she leads her friends on a long mystery hunt to discover the father. Oh, and towards the end she has her baby.
[Tags: Pregnant, Twilight Sparkle, Baby, Mystery, Secret, Birth]
Inspiration from "Pinkie Pie Gets Pregnant" but in no way follows the same event.
Art is not mine.
Edit: OMC-13 On the PopularStories list? Yay!
Oooh a treasure hunt XD
I like this concept. Tracking now.
im liking it
Well, cannot exactly give it to you for originality, but let's see if you can do this well.
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I'm gonna enjoy this
I think that's Twi's mom.Otherwise , great story so far .Twilight is
pleased . I kinda thought it had Big Mac too cause , you know a farm. heh heh.
Well this is going to be interesting....
Hhmmmmmm. I wonder... It's spike because she said she didn't meet a stallion.
I'm not going to make assumptions on who the father will be, so I will track this story and see what plans you have for us. Also, this reminds me of that treasure hunt from that dreadful Generation 3.5, when I think it was Sweetie Belle, held together a treasure hunt to find her.
Looks pretty good! And yeah, the pic is Twilights Mum. But I can't wait to read some more!! Tracking this!!
761826 That's original Twilight
I like the concept but actually I don't really like the story.
It seems a bit rushed, and Twilight acts pretty OC...
Either way I think I'll track it
762086 Twilight :Heh Heh
I guess you can say ...
(Gets glasses)
I (pokes eyes)
Owwwwww!!!!!!
Rainbow : If you cant qualify as my pet ,Twilight I'm pretty sure you
Won't be able to as cool as me .
TWILIGHT:I know but I was just trying to get...
Dash:Don't say it....
Twilight :20%cooler....
Dash:You said it .....
Twilight:
Just one question; are the characters humanized or ponies?
Other than that
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I will wait for more chapters. Until then, Imma be like
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They're ponies. I know she's a bit OOC, but I'm working on it. I'm trying to find a better picture-any suggestions?
Chapter two and maybe three will be out by tonight.
this has potencial. not only would this go on to birth, but there is like a crimenovel on it to
THE FATHER IS TWILIGHT.
BAM Father found okay everybody go home.
I really like this story. Very funny and light and I can't wait to see my answer being right .
estergoldberg.typepad.com/.a/6a0105349ca980970c0133ed3d3b90970b-500wi the sprinkles is this fanfic and i am the dog. i shall now wait for more chapters.
MORE!!!
Nope.
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Don't you dare turn this into a "Pinkie Pie gets Pregnant" story where Twilight actually isn't pregnant
I predict that Twilight isn't pregnant. No pregnant mare (no matter how early) can bounce >= Pinkie Pie.
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I promise y'all she is pregnant.
Doctor Whooves?
Jut a wild guess, but I'm going to enjoy this very much!
ohhhh~~~
awsome
this is one of the most confusing stories I've read, it stumps me.
Only one other story has me for a tizzy, but that is because the writing is as if the person is having a mental breakdown.
wait, the dad could be a mare?!?! how the fuq does that work?!?! I'm on to you Lyra.
Never said it was a stallion or mare or pony for that matter so Spike is a possobility
780647 Magic and ^
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MAGIC
But not kidding multiple stories use magic in mare/mare relations to get foals
I'll tell you this much- IF it is a mare, yes it was magic :D
This is one of those stories thats great to find after its finished because then you can just read the whole thing in one go. The waiting is TOOOOOORTURE. Great story though
sooo...should I use mr bean here or something?
I'm getting Deja Vu here with a similar fic (although this time its Twilight being preggies)
So basically you've just added everybody to the list
all genders apply, all species apply.
Back to square one
So re-read edit
1 of the others knows under pinkie-promise
May not be a stallion
lives in ponyville
Wait.....Twilight reading "Parenting for a Single Mare"
R63-clone or self-insemination?
There is no good evidence to rule out anything yet!!!!
That's right... EVERYbody to the list. At least you know they live in Ponyville.
780733 Do please.
780844a'ight
magic
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Okay... poll time!
How long do you want this to be?
A. Just three clues, then timeskip to the birth.
B. Five clues, then time skip.
C. Seven clues, then time skip.
D. X number of clues, then random fillerness to the birth instead of timeskip.
Y'all have an hour, because I want to finish this!
its Spike calling it.
780861 make this last man, make it last.
As long as it could possibly be with making it seem stretched thin, maybe seven clues. C
I think D.... It's the one with the most torture potential, without limit you can lead us to any conclusion you want us and even then you could throw in a few dream sequences to further muddy the trail.
Even the birthscene, or rather especially the birthscene.
You could have any character's point of view looking at the 'father' and then have the character wake up
Wait..Why am I giving advice to torture the reader? oh yeah, I'd like the story to be drawn out as much as possible so I can see and add to the insane theories.
I don't want you to use a number of clues before you go to the birth, I want you to play with your audience. I want you to simply write a story you feel happy about. If you choose to end it in 3 hints or 3000 hints so be it. but do it because you feel it flows right with the story. Not because the readers want closure, who cares about them?
hmmm, I get the impression that the Red Herring she was referring to was the last sentence, so I'm gonna stick with saying it's a stallion. It could be anyone, so my first guess is Doctor Whooves (If twilight is going to be a single parent, the dad has to have a good reason and being a time traveler might just be good enough). My second guess is Trixie (one night stand of hate sex which led to a magically induced pregnancy)
EDIT: It could be a changeling as well. That's my third and final guess.
D
I'm gonna be crazy and say that SNAILS IS THE FATHER!
It's not a colt-I promise that much. Or a filly. It is an adult/grown pony.
As for the red herring... /winks.
And you know what? I'm just going to keep writing until I think it's time to close this off.
Oh, and by the way, I'm still debating who the father is xD
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OK here's what I got.
Something about a red herring. Pretty sure that symbolizes something, or it has some other meaning from the fish. Remember hearing about it from school, but can't remember the meaning.
Stallion:
One of the Mane 6 knows him.
To me that sounds like a good friend/family type of "know".
So, Big Mac . . . Blueblood? . . . Brayburn . . . Caramel?
Mare:
Needs to be a unicorn. Reason being, if a unicorn could get herself pregnant, . . . Not ending well for society.
So, Trixie . . . Vinyl Scratch? . . . Lyra?
Anybody else have any idea?
Or, Twilight could turn some random mare into a stallion for the night... I'm sure Twilight could pull it off. But I'm not saying what happened specifically.
well, what can i say...
Wait for it
got it
I want more of this!
Sometimes I think Twilight is an ass sometimes.