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Zubric


Love to write whatever comes to mind and enjoy Brony stuff.

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You know all of those tales of random bronies somehow getting their wish of being able to go to Equestria? Well, it happened to me surprisingly. But boy, was it so ordinary. Well kind of until the other showed up.

Parody of sorts to self-insert stories.

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Comments ( 4 )

Interesting idea for a story, seeing two Brony's living the dream and duking it out with out an other, and show how terrible OP and amoral self-inserts often are. It think you could have taken for time to refine your story to had more depth to the conflict between the two bronies and to show how different they are from one another or even creepily similar when they examen each other behaviors.

7180654 thanks for the comment and yeah probably should have. Ugh now I feel bad for not fully using my concept.

7181599 well, you could still do a rewrite on it later and post a blog that sais you reworked it again, I am sure your reader will understand.

If only this happened to me but I could come back anytime

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