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Studying the ponies of Ponyville, Twilight is sure the last piece of her ultimate plan for friendship lessons has fallen into place with Sharp Mind's arrival. Can changelings be taught friendship?

I guess it should be added: this starts at the beginning of Season Five, and many chapters will show parts or all of the episodes from that, just with 100% more changelings. I would highly suggest watching that season before reading. Or not. Up to you!

Working on more ideas for this before I continue it.

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Man, is that going to be awkward when the big reveal comes out... :rainbowlaugh:

So what happened to all the real ponies? Did Twilight do something to them?

7179124 They are all fine, I doubt Twilight would risk her friends and townsfolk just for science... would she? :twilightoops:

7179321 It can sometimes be Russian Roulette with your brain-cells, I know. Glad you enjoyed and I will see about continuing this :twilightsmile:

lets see - let's see

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Fascinating idea! I hope you continue to develop it and share it with us :twilightsmile:

Wouldn't Twilight be easily detected if she's so happy with observing her subjects?

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Well knowing Twilight she's taken meticulous notes on every changeling's starting cover form, probably remembering them better than the changelings do. Have some pony disguised as the cover form come into town just as the pony the changeling replaced shows up, then the "new" pony leaves town, the changeling assumes the phony form never realizing they where the one that originally created it. having learned about friendship the changeling feels no need to replace any other pony now, and Twilight quietly takes them aside and lets them know the truth (cause AJ insists) By the time Cranky and Matilda's wedding rolls around every pony is back and every ling with the exception of Kevin(he refuses to disguise himself anymore or is just dim) has assumed a new pony indenity

7179452 Can you believe that that apostrophe messed up part of an awesome joke I had crafted? 1984 words. Adding the apostrophe made fimfic count it's as two words and ruined the joke! I had to search, but I managed to remove a word elsewhere and bring it back into line.

Positively Orwellian of you!

7182628 The way I figure it in this one, a changeling takes on every aspect of the pony they are mimicking, including the cutie mark and magic (to some extent, they have the power the pony would normally have, but don't have all the nifty spells memorized and have to fuel the magic with love energy instead).

Explains a lot about that episode, like why Twilight was matched by a regular unicorn, why she didn't just teleport, etc.

Integration is going smoothly!

OMG season five makes so much sense now!
Keep going! ;)

7399532 I tend to do that with a fair few of my stories. If you want to see snippets of backstory from lots of background characters, read Twilight's Story, about Twilight Velvet. :twilightsmile:

7399574 oh yeah, I did just finish that one too from my backlog!

but!
muh thermodynamics!
god danm magic bullshit freindlyness grumble grumble grumble

7491137 Sounds like somepony needs a hug! :pinkiehappy:

This story is such a clever idea!

7494063 Friendship Green is ponies!

No, no! I read it too fast! I need another chapter, stat!

7494212 Tell you a secret? One is already written. Wait one day and it will be up. :twilightsmile:

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Why are you making me us wait?! How cruel of you! Take pity and post?

7494250 *points to the title of the chapter* :trollestia:

Wait, I thought that changeling was named Thorax.

7495590 Who, the one disguised as Apple Bloom? I tend to name changelings after their talents, what they are good at (sort of like ponies) with the odd name that just doesn't make sense (like ponies).

You've gone too far into just regurgitating the episodes with slight tweaks. I'd prefer chapters like the previous ones, which gloss over the normal episode content and jump right to the bits that are actually your own work.
Edit:
Also, an "Ask".

Twilight, are you doing all of this so that Chryssi will have no choice but to pursue you romantically in order to regain her hive?

Also

Celestia, when did you start listening to Twilight instead of brushing off all her ideas?

Nah, you have about five years yet before we consider a fic abandoned!

Skillful reinterpretation of the episode!

Certainly, Chrysalis must know something's up by now. Question is, how will she react when a town full of her changelings opposes her?
Question for Spike's doppelganger: how did you manage to figure out dragon fire messaging?
Keep going! ')

7496453 The problem was, I was changeling a lot of little bits here and there, I did gloss over big chunks of the episode and tried to only stick to the bits that had specific changeling-esque reasons. Will I go into so much depth in an episode again? Only if it is important to see how the particular changeling integrates themselves and reaches acceptance with just being nice.

As for the asks, I will try and get Princess Celestia to reply, she is horribly busy reading friendship reports. Could you imagine how much worse it is, when Twilight is reporting on dozens and dozens of friendships, and not just her own?

7496489 I really should do a chapter where ol' bug-butt gets to have a few words. As for Spike, I am sure I could find him to get an answer or two.

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I'd think that, as a necessarily accomplished spymaster by virtue of her ten century sovereignty, Celestia would almost certainly be more comfortable with reports about a whole network of interactions on a constant basis as opposed to sporadic information about a very narrow group. In fact, I'd expect her to be enjoying the whole thing a good deal, much like an experienced survivalist can still have a great time at a camp site when there are friends with them.

Okay, all asks have been forwarded to their targets, due to logistics I could only get them one question per post. The two questions are:

Question for Spike's doppelganger: how did you manage to figure out dragon fire messaging?

Twilight, are you doing all of this so that Chryssi will have no choice but to pursue you romantically in order to regain her hive?

Awesome story :) the concept is very funny. But I agree with Clockwork here. I enjoyed the other chapters except the previous one. Some slices of the show are nice, but i enjoy more what you add :)

Ask to Angel Bunny: did you not noticed at all that you were living with a changeling or do you not mind as long as your salad is on the table? XD

7496462 Five years? You sure are a patient one. :derpytongue2:

7494092 But green is not a creative colour! (Soylent Green, I know)

7496656 Chryssi! Of all ponies, I thought you would love Friendship Green the most! :rainbowlaugh: Also, yes I got the 'Don't hug me, I'm scared' reference

7496613 Fair enough, will go a bit easier on such. There are a lot of episodes, and I want to get through all of them, but I also want a LOT of chapters, which means there are going to be plenty of non-episode-related ones. Including a very special one, and I think everypony will be looking forward to it as much as I am. :derpytongue2:

7496658 awesome, that means more changelings fic to read xD

7496768 Mwahahaha, I assure you, I will always have plenty of changeling fics to read.

If you don't mind mature, I would highly suggest Shining Chitin, the first version was done as comedy, but now it is back, gritty, but still kinda adorable and cute.

7496772 oh man! You are a life saver! I will check it out.
I have been in a shortage of lovebugs for a while because my inbox is a bit deserted.
I even have begin to slaughter the English lnaguage try to write some of my own:twilightsheepish:

7496780 Not a problem. Probably about 2/3 of my stories have changelings as a major theme. Following you back, so when you publish (and you had better) I can read your stuff. :twilightsmile:

7496781 i will check you too :)
I feel stalked xD
You dont know what you are asking for, but okey ;p

7496786 Not stalked, but my phone beeps whenever I have a reply on here, so I know... :trixieshiftright:

7496789 the wonders of modern technology! Well i will cut the silly comments and beeps and will keep reading :twilightblush:

Aaaaaw, YUSS~! Gimme more more more!!

7496636 it's easy to be patient when you have other Fics to read. :ajsmug:

Shouldn't that conversation over the communication spell be with Gray Sleek instead of Sharp Mind?

Phase 2 starting off strong! Two lings down, hundreds to go!
Actually, do the rest of the CMC count as activated? Probably not, since AB's shared dream only included the real CMC if interpretation is correct.
Keep going! ;)

We love how Chrysalis is like, "everything is fine! I went and sent them all to fend for themselves and its all according to plan!"
To Sharp: do you ever get that nagging feeling that everything is right with the world?
Keep going! ;)

That's Chrysalis bit was not quite expected, but I like it.
What happens if she sends another changeling, since there's no one left to replace? Will Twilight start cycling back through ponies that have returned after phase 3?

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