Rainbow has had a small crush on Twilight for a while now, and accepts that they will never be together. But when she helps out her friend in an embarrassing circumstance, Twilight makes the first move.
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Good.
But work on POV, is it your perspective or Rainbow's perspective, or are you thinking as Rainbow?
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Ah yes um that is a problem with this story XD
It was originally going to be in rainbows perspective but I added twilights as well (it's a third person story also)
I had guidelines to who's pov it was in at one time but I discarded it because I felt like it was unneeded
I italicized thoughts at one point... But yeah it's rainbow thinking every now and again
7546964 you should bring back the POV guidelines and italicize thoughts again. It would make it more clear.
best of luck!
Thank you so much for writing Flash getting punched in the face by RD, I think I need more of that
Not bad.
Finally! Someone who doesn't like Flahlight!!