Please tell me Luna will be paying a visit to Twilight, or at least Celestia. I think those two will be the only ones left to not be wrecked by her new wang
sorry.... I do not believe in ANY religion.... except the unofficial Ponism, I just figured that saying Tartarus was more in context here seeing as they MENTIONED it in the show while Hell has not
Although for some reason, I do see either Luna or Celestia getting a hoof on things... that and if chapter 2 was any indication, Sweetie Belle may be a potential target. Hope not though.
So, my doctors want to know what sort of medical sorcery you have cast on me, as it has been well over 4 hours and multiple masturbation sessions, and this boner still won't go away.
So yeah... Gonna need a detailed report on how to fix this... They're saying I might go insane, die, or go insane and then die, from it.
I enjoy this greatly... so very much... and I don't even like futanari...
One issue, though... you keep saying "it's" for possession. (I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi) Its = possession. To be used in cases such as "She gazed down at her beast, at the growing organ that had taken on a life of it's own." -- the correct version would be "She gazed down at her beast, at the growing organ that had taken on a life of its own." It's = "It is." To be used in cases such as "It's imperative we get the Elements of Harmony right away!" (Not from your story this time, I was just too lazy to go find an example in there). (Just because English hates everyone )
>It must of been some dream >Luna only offered an open eye to the event >but this just came for you a few minutes ago >the sun had progressed in it's steady march >How could she ever face her friends again should they find out what happened. >with no control over it's actions >move her hoof down it's length >vein along it's underside >taken on a life of it's own >growing to it's full angry glory >imagined that would of been rather uncomfortable >she could of mistaken it for a fifth leg >how much it must of hurt her victim >At how her huge size must of felt to that poor mare >How it must of stretched and strained her >stroke up along it's side >it was at it's full size >spring back to it's fully erect stance >the other continued it's endless slide >She wanted to keep herself form hurting another pony
>The concept of a pony acting in such a way would be as foreign to them as the idea of roasted meat
Analysis at the end of ch. 3: This could be a great look into the sexual mind wanting things frowned upon/taken unfairly from others and the coping with said problem. A great psychosexual experiment. As it stands, however, I don't see that happening unless I read into it with that express purpose.
That said, I might read it like that. I've always been a nice person, and rape disgusted me until I stumbled upon a rape fiction. Can you say conflicted emotions? I guess its the feeling of control. God, if i ever get into a relationship i think I'm gonna need a lot of safe words. Just goes to show you how little we know about ourselves. That said, I still thonk the literal act of rape is terrible... But stories involving it send me into a psychoanalytic tailspin.
All you want are my thumbs up and I gave you a mental health reporton myself. Ha! I guess I owe you the favorite.
I feel the madness overtaking me!
It is a good pain...
Wewt new chapter!
Oh god. I can sense the scene where Luna watch Ponyville at night, and see Twilight doing... And then.. Oh god..
Please continue.
"The blunt hear looked like some sort of battering ram,"
I think that should read as 'The blunt head looked like...'
Good chapter.
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really? I can see her violating Luna actually....that is if her magic power increases after each victim which it doesnt seem to do.....
oh god.... I'm going to Tartarus for this but....
TRACKING!!
Okay, 3 things:
1. Why are you writing this?
2. Why am I reading this?
3. Why is this giving me a boner?
I think we're all going to hell, so I might as well track it and stay along for the ride
Also, rape Trixie. Although she'd probably want it
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Please tell me Luna will be paying a visit to Twilight, or at least Celestia. I think those two will be the only ones left to not be wrecked by her new wang
I see... quite a good read. Although i don't think derpy would approve. also please don't rape derpy
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Wheeee, Everypony get on board the train to Tartarus!
What the? FUTA TWI?
About time, getting sick of Futashy anyways, dood
I sense Luna is going to get to .... ahem know Twilight better.
*hethum* I need a change of clothes
And also MOAR!
782015 are you.....do you beleiven the greek gods? Please say yes i dont want to be the only one!
Great *but disgusting*story bro keep at it.
I am going to hell for reading this.
Well at least it is warm there.
But somehow, she part of her felt worse because of it.
Shouldn't that be either : part of her felt worse because of it.
Or : She felt worse because of it
Otherwise keep it coming
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sorry.... I do not believe in ANY religion.... except the unofficial Ponism, I just figured that saying Tartarus was more in context here seeing as they MENTIONED it in the show while Hell has not
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And all those pics of "you gonna get raped" HAH! WHo needs a Twilight to say that? Lets get a outside response!
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You gotta be kidding me! ⊙.⊙
784603 damn uh thats okay i freaked out when they mentioned tarturas in the oh snd cerburus xp lol guess i will leave you be now
See you all in Tartarus.
Although for some reason, I do see either Luna or Celestia getting a hoof on things...
that and if chapter 2 was any indication, Sweetie Belle may be a potential target.
Hope not though.
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Yes, these are breaks... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_shh.png
We won't be needing them on this trip. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_hmph.png
I REGRET NOTHING!!!!!
I'm tracking this and I regret nothing! Pony hell here I come!
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WITNESS YOUR DOOOOOOOOOM! FOR CHAOS! I LOVE YOU!
Wait...DID I READ THAT RIGHT???
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So, my doctors want to know what sort of medical sorcery you have cast on me, as it has been well over 4 hours and multiple masturbation sessions, and this boner still won't go away.
So yeah... Gonna need a detailed report on how to fix this... They're saying I might go insane, die, or go insane and then die, from it.
As for no brakes on the rape train...?
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I enjoy this greatly... so very much... and I don't even like futanari...
One issue, though... you keep saying "it's" for possession. (I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi)
Its = possession. To be used in cases such as "She gazed down at her beast, at the growing organ that had taken on a life of it's own." -- the correct version would be "She gazed down at her beast, at the growing organ that had taken on a life of its own."
It's = "It is." To be used in cases such as "It's imperative we get the Elements of Harmony right away!" (Not from your story this time, I was just too lazy to go find an example in there).
(Just because English hates everyone )
Anyhoof, continuing on to the next chapter now...
Haiku: Twilight's Penis
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Twilight is the best
Twilight has a huge penis
Twilight likes to rape
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^ My Thoughts to Twilight's situation and her thoughts.
Also mine as I have a boner and I want it to stop but it compels me to read on.
>It must of been some dream
>Luna only offered an open eye to the event
>but this just came for you a few minutes ago
>the sun had progressed in it's steady march
>How could she ever face her friends again should they find out what happened.
>with no control over it's actions
>move her hoof down it's length
>vein along it's underside
>taken on a life of it's own
>growing to it's full angry glory
>imagined that would of been rather uncomfortable
>she could of mistaken it for a fifth leg
>how much it must of hurt her victim
>At how her huge size must of felt to that poor mare
>How it must of stretched and strained her
>stroke up along it's side
>it was at it's full size
>spring back to it's fully erect stance
>the other continued it's endless slide
>She wanted to keep herself form hurting another pony
>The concept of a pony acting in such a way would be as foreign to them as the idea of roasted meat
785469 >breaks
Analysis at the end of ch. 3: This could be a great look into the sexual mind wanting things frowned upon/taken unfairly from others and the coping with said problem. A great psychosexual experiment. As it stands, however, I don't see that happening unless I read into it with that express purpose.
That said, I might read it like that. I've always been a nice person, and rape disgusted me until I stumbled upon a rape fiction. Can you say conflicted emotions? I guess its the feeling of control. God, if i ever get into a relationship i think I'm gonna need a lot of safe words. Just goes to show you how little we know about ourselves. That said, I still thonk the literal act of rape is terrible... But stories involving it send me into a psychoanalytic tailspin.
All you want are my thumbs up and I gave you a mental health reporton myself. Ha! I guess I owe you the favorite.
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I believe in greek gods.
3562286 I worship Nemesis and Nyx.
3605796 nemesis as in Nemesis prime
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I do
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Thems the breaks(?)