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I'm a 23 yr old guy who loves Spike, Spike Ships and MLP. I love other things too, but other than that, I hope to bring you some great times and fun memories!!!
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There are some sentences within quotes that have on period at the end.
It is too soon to tell, but I'll follow this for now.
Its good. Continue and i will read it.
You still need to remember to put periods at the end of sentences with quotes.
As for the story, why do I have a feeling that Lance's disguise is going to bite him in the flank? As for the sex, keep it within the story, but have something saying when the clop begins and when the clop ends.
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You sir, have just given me a silly and reasonable idea for the next chapter.
Thank you
I REALLY like this story so far, it has a good plot and alot of potential. Please keep it up and i wish you the best of luck with this.
In addition, id say go with A but dont make it to far fetched...
Yay! Another chapter! Go lance!
Unless Lance intends to make the solution more...permanent, he is just going to make things worse for Apploosa.
Eta on next chapter?
First off, I would like to say that you didn't a very good job at your first sex scene. Next, I forget. What is Lance's cutie mark in his disguised form? As far as who to have him sex up, it would have to be ponies passing through or living in Appleloosa. So, a lot of choices are out. Unless he's going to be a drifter. In which case, the sky's the limit, as long as he doesn't get exposed, The best chances for that happening are Ponyville, Canterlot, and maybe the Crystal Empire. In any case, I'll wait to see Lance's next move before making suggestions/requests.
Good job indeed on the clop, however a bit quick. Not that I of all ponies should be talking, but if your going to go for the full both sides blows and the real deal, try to add different positions or feelings to make it last longer. Just a suggestion.
Personally, I like it. I agree with frankie and gumbo. there is only one thing i am confused on... does anypony know he is a changling?
Excuse me. I got an update notice, but I don't see the chapter up.
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Sorry, I had to do some quick edits. Im fully done with it now
Is Lance near the Cloning Pool?