This is a collaboration book.
Main author is daybreak5465 or OC name is Chelsea
Co author is me or OC name is Fox.
After traveling through the portal to the world of CHS. Chelsea finds herself making friends with the main six. On her day of arrival to CHS she finds out that she isn't the only new student. A younge boy named Fox is already friends with one of the main six, and is now trying to gain the trust of the other five. Every time he convinces another one of the main six things get harder and more Chaotic for Chelsea.
Chapters (2)
You cought my attenion at the end of this story is funny amazing start keep it up
Herself is 1 word, too should be to, quiet should be quite, caous should be chaos and amoungst should be amongst.
With a description like that I am not even going to bother reading the rest of it. Did you even use a basic spell checker?
If you want anyone to take this seriously you need to use a spell check. There are hundreds of them available online for free and most internet browsers now have them built in.
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Hey the description doesn't have to be perfect the book dose. that's like judging a book by it's cover. So there
7174974 Really?
1.The description is what people look at when they decide whether or not to read your story. When every other word is a spelling mistake Its going make 90% of people not want to read your story. I corrected all of the spelling mistakes and you decided to ignore them.
2.You are right it is judging a book by its cover. When the cover is full of spelling mistakes Im not going to bother reading the rest of it. If the Harry potter books had loads of mistakes all over the cover then nobody would have taken it seriously.
3. Its not a book.
7176298 I never said it was a good excuse silly.
I'm just to lazy to fix it
but if I must to stop the argument then I will
There we go all better. Please feel free to proof read this
7176566 That is about 1000 times better than the old description. The story actually sounds interesting now.
2 tiny mistakes
young does not have an e on the end.
no need for the capital C on Chaotic.
Im currently typing this from my phone while in the toilets at work but I will read the whole story when I get home.
7176860 Thanks a million.
I hate fixing mistakes that I've made but I also hate fighting.
I probably never would have fixed it if it weren't for the argument.
I probably won't fix those small mistakes though because there are only two and not the entire thing hehe. any how thanks a mill
Why is dis second pov!?!? My god, so many stories that don't contain a shred of "You"\"me" but have their point of view fudged up... This is the second one I've come across TODAY.
7178688 hey its me. Haven't heard from you in awhile . I hope everything is okay. message me when you are avaliable I have a idea for chapter 3 if you atill want to continue this collab