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Forces of Darkness


I'm a normal person. Totally not a evil force waiting to destroy the world... or anything like that.

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Queen Chrysalis is subjected to reformation. But can an evil bug queen truly learn the magic of friendship? Well, if anyone can teach her to be good, surely it's Applejack.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 24 )

My guess is she is desperate, judging by the shape she's in.

Talk about a rapid start, but I didn't see any errors and everyone seemed in character.

Go Chryssie go!

Meanwhile, the entire hive is playing go fish or lazying about.

Big Mac is a bit quick to suggest killing there.

Friendship tastes like coconut.

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Big Mac is a bit quick to suggest killing there.

I see Big Mac as being used to keeping his thoughts to himself, so he doesn't realize how harsh they sound out loud.

Talk about a rapid start, but I didn't see any errors and everyone seemed in character.

Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

Friendship tastes like coconut.

Headcanon accepted.

That was a quick start! Nice! Upvote and fave

Moar! :pinkiehappy:


Stay Thirsty My Friends
-The Most Interesting Man In The World

Maybe the best middle ground would be Queen-mother?


... This can only go well.

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Hopefully soon! I'm busy this week but I'll try to find time. :pinkiesmile:

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Thank you! It's nice to know that people are excited for the continuation of the story. :pinkiehappy:

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The "Great Mother" title was inspired by Mother Changeling. Queen-mother sounds good too though!

7359949 An, I see. And yeah, it keeps the motherly part and still denotes her status.

D'awwww, she started to really care about them.

... Though if nymphs in the hive have a similar proficiency in getting into trouble, how is the hive still standing? :twilightoops:

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Ancient and powerful magic. Though I'd say it isn't "standing" since it's in a cave, which you'll see next chapter. Also, all the adult changelings are watching over them, while the Crusaders seem to run around largely unsupervised.
As a side note, do you really like Chrysalis? I keep spotting you in the comments section of Chrysalis-related stories; I think they were Change and A Changeling Effect.

7430945 That'd explain it, though the idea of a changeling CMC is hilarious.

Chryssie is my favourite Mlp character, bar none. Hence why I scour fimfiction for stories starring her that don't involve her dying or being locked up forever, etc. And changelings, together with griffons, are my favourite race in mlp.

Bad form, Chryssie, you shouldn't dislike her just because she's an albino.

Huh, it's time to par-tay!

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Did I-? Oh. I probably should have mentioned eye color. :facehoof: But, um, who do we know who has a white coat and a dark blue mane and tail?

7500500 Doh, I somehow completely missed the part about her hair colour, now I feel stupid. :facehoof:

... Now I wonder if the CMC will put two and two together.

But, um, who do we know who has a white coat and a dark blue mane and tail?

Shining Armor:trollestia:

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GAAAAASP!!! SPOILERS!
Just kidding, I meant that to be pretty obvious.

Ehmahgerd after so long its out! And I thought u were dead XD

Comment posted by Putainnn deleted Aug 4th, 2019
Comment posted by Putainnn deleted Aug 4th, 2019
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