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Alex Warlorn

Joined February 2012
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Just your average Bronie who happened upon an idea that might actually turn out to be clever enough for guys to love.

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Personal Pros Of Poor Ponies Possessing Possible Post-traumatic Stress Disorder Brought On By Discord The Deity of Chaos' Mind Games Forcing Them To See the Flip Side Of Their Element Or Appealing To Their Worse Nature Or Outright Cheating With One.

First up, is being the most honest pony in Ponyville worth it if it costs you your friends?

Second up, you're a clown and you know it and parties are where you shine. But why should the joke be on you? Why should you suffer just for their amusement?

Third up, and yep it's Rarity! Being generous to others is good and all, but what about me? But I worked for what I have!

Forth in the Discord Pony Series. Fluttershy. You don't surrender to your demons, you know you're not perfect, you know your friends are there for you . . . so why do you have to lose anyway?

And now we've come to the fifth. Rainbow Dash. As loyal as pony could be. Her loyalties are impossible to break! But fun science fact! Nothing is unbreakable when struck against itself.

We are the sixth and it's . . . TRIXIE?! You've had something precious your whole life. But you never noticed it, appreciated, or even realized how much it was a part of you until it was gone.

And now we've to Twilight Sparkle. Nothing more to say now. Read for yourself.

And we've come to the epilogue. Tell me what you think and what you feel, because I feel this piece is meant to speak for itself.

The Dramatic Reading version for the entire first season with original fan-music is found here! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ClMeWbsJ7wQ&list=PLB51B70AAB7E85A69&feature=plcp

Recursive fan-works found here. http://alexwarlorn.deviantart.com/journal/MLP-FiM-Pony-POV-Series-Fanworks-audio-adaption-274110361

THIS IS NOT THE END! There is a light at the end of the tunnel!

First Published
16th Jun 2012
Last Modified
16th Jun 2012

Comments ( 114 )

#1 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 5d ago · · ·

Bout time you got on Fimfiction. Now to reread all of this awesome stuff.

#2 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 5d ago · · ·

>>755742

I can't believe I made it.

And I have . . . .

sixty six chapters to upload.

0-0

*Falls over*

And I don't know how precisely I should divid them up if at all, and where to place the links to the background music!!!

#3 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 5d ago · · ·

>>755877

You could always post comments in the comments section with relevant music links.

as for dividing....Well, that's up to you. Good luck with that.

#4 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·
#5 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

>>756258

The rest of the series (the next season) is called Reharmonization.

#6 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

And it still hurts to read those stories about their suffering.

But this isn't the end, it is just the beginning. They will show their true strength in the next season.

#7 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

It's great to see you here! It means I have another place to favorite Discorded/Reharmonized series! :twilightsmile:

Edit: it should be possible to make those links in the description clickable, other writers have been doing it somehow.

Edit2: <i> tags got derped at the end of chapter 4 and at the beginning of chapter 6.

#8 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

Hey, yeah, this gets insta-faved.  I love, love in depth psychological characterization, and there's nothing wrong with some darkness, in my book.  Sometimes, as a reader, whats so terribly wrong is a more powerful indicator of what is right than actually seeing it head on.  It just gets you right in the gut and makes you see things a different way...

There are so many brilliantly horrifying moments in this, but for me Ditzy with her muffin is the one that I remember most...that makes me want to cry.

#9 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

>>756497

Thanks for the heads up dude!

#10 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

>>756468

Well, I just hope adding it here isn't too little too late for those who wanted it here.

#11 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

>>757017

Be sure to check out the audio adaption then. It has original music, voice actors, the whole nine yards. http://www.youtube.com/user/LouisBadalament

And this story ISN'T over yet! This season takes the heroes virtues apart like in the cartoon. The next season does what the cartoon forgot to do. Putting those virtues back together!

#12 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

Woot! Woot! Mother Bucking Woot!

#13 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

>>758034

And the show isn't over yet!

#14 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

>>758177

Be aware that I know about the huge stockpile of fics on your dA account. I just haven't touched them yet, because they are on dA, and dA's new(ish) ad setup causes my computer to chug like a wino at a frat party.

:pinkiesick:

#15 · Chapter 6 · 96w, 4d ago · 2 · 1 ·

For this one, I wanted to grind Discord's statue into dust. :flutterrage:

#16 · Chapter 7 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

Now I just wanna hug Twilight. :fluttershyouch:

#17 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

Bad end. *Sets Optimus Prime and Matrix against Discord* Burn, motherbucker! :pinkiecrazy:

In all seriousness, damn that's heartbreaking. In a good way, mind, but still...

#18 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

>>758953

The stories may LOOK unconnected, but Pony POV Series continues in season 1. (you don't think I'd name it season zero and just have one do you? :-) )

#19 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

>>759370 Yeah, I know they're all connected. :raritywink:

#20 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 3d ago · · ·

>>757412

Considering how many people did already read the story here and how the feedback is, I am sure that it will work out.

#21 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 2d ago · · ·

Woot! It's here! Got to be honest, when I followed on da, I got completely overwhelmed by how much of the story there was. Kept taking a break promising to get back later, would return to find entire new story arcs to read! Now that it's here I can keep better track and follow as it gets posted from the beginning? Awesome. Keep up the great work! :yay:

#22 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 2d ago · · ·

great fic , this part without the sequels feels like a cosmic horror story.

#23 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 14h ago · · ·

>>766620

You ain't seen nothing yet.

#24 · Chapter 4 · 96w, 6h ago · 2 · ·

Ah, the birth of Fluttercruel, one of my all time favorite characters. :yay:

#25 · Chapter 7 · 96w, 5h ago · · ·

Twilight! No! :fluttercry:

#26 · Chapter 8 · 96w, 5h ago · · ·

Gah! This last chapter... :pinkiesad2:

I started reading this on da, and I guess I had repressed my memories on how freaking dark this chapter was. Fantastically well written, beautiful piece, but dang if it doesn't toy with your emotions.

At least I know that it doesn't have to end this way. Can't imagine how I'd feel if I hadn't read the later chapters before this. :twilightoops:

#27 · Chapter 6 · 95w, 2d ago · · ·

OOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!

So that's why Discord went after Trixie.  She, like Twilight, was an Element of Magic.  Trixie was a test run for Twilight.  Okay.:raritystarry:

#28 · Chapter 8 · 94w, 4d ago · · ·

It's great to see these here. You did such an amazing job of showing the pain the poor girls felt through it all. And that epilogue... :fluttershbad:

#29 · Chapter 7 · 86w, 6d ago · · ·

Where's John? I need to punch him in the nose for hurting Twi? :fluttershysad:

#30 · Chapter 8 · 86w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1144649

Whose John?

#31 · Chapter 6 · 86w, 21h ago · · ·

:heart:

sooo sad!!

#32 · Chapter 8 · 86w, 20h ago · · ·

>>1179951

Things get happier, slowly but surely.

#33 · Chapter 7 · 83w, 4d ago · 3 · 2 ·

Why are there only 3 comments on this? This stuff is gold, guahahahah!:pinkiecrazy:

*drains in the despair that Twilight feels, greedily and happily lapping it all up with a twisted smile on his face*

Yes, I'm an evil person, these types of fics make me smile and laugh instead of be sad.

:moustache: for you good sir, for writing this.

#34 · Chapter 8 · 83w, 4d ago · · ·

>>756468

Hurts? Hurts you say:pinkiegasp:? My dear friend, why on Earth would it hurt? I find this to be most deliciously evil and twisted, and it gives me a great many smiles and chuckles to read this wonderfully chaotic ending the mane six must live with.:pinkiecrazy:

This was just a fantastic read, it was as amusing to read this time as it was to read the first time. Now time to read the rest that you've got.

#35 · Chapter 8 · 83w, 4d ago · · ·

>>1279300

No comment. 0-0 Nice to know you enjoyed the story. And I guess cause I posted all the segments in one day.

#36 · Chapter 1 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·

Cool. I like it so far. It was hard to read Applejack's, or should I say Liarjack's, accent. :applejackconfused:

#37 · Chapter 2 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·

...:pinkiecrazy:

#38 · Chapter 3 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·

Ooh, creative saying right there at the end. :raritystarry:

#39 · Chapter 4 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·

This is awesome! :yay:

#40 · Chapter 5 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·

:rainbowhuh: Confused Rainbow is confused. (why she ditched them)

#41 · Chapter 6 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·

Hmm...:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

#42 · Chapter 7 · 82w, 4d ago · · 1 ·

:twilightoops: Twilight would never act like this!

#43 · Chapter 8 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·

I didn't cry before, but this is sad! :raritycry::rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::fluttercry::ajsleepy::twilightoops:

#44 · Chapter 8 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·

>>1317922

I've edited that accent several times to tone it down. :-(

>>1317932

Bioshock reference.

>>1317945

Because it was them or Cloudsdale.

>>1317970

Apply enough pressure.

>>1317985

Then the pain didn't come across as forced. Then all is good. .  . .. *looks at Discord's twisted world* Okay, maybe not.

#45 · Chapter 8 · 82w, 4d ago · · ·
#46 · Chapter 3 · 81w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

Nice Bioshock refrence I like how Pinkie is a communist

#47 · Chapter 8 · 81w, 6d ago · · ·
#48 · Chapter 1 · 77w, 2d ago · · ·

Heavy accent, but interesting story.

Applejack doesn't sound like that! Not even my country country cousins have accents like that!

#49 · Chapter 8 · 77w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1528122

Would you be as so kind as to present a revised version which would be far more accurate?

#50 · Chapter 8 · 61w, 3d ago · · ·

Doctor, please come back...

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