Vinyl and Octavia have been together for years now and every day is the same. By chance, Vinyl realizes she misses the way she and Octavia used to be. Obviously, this can't stand, only question is, who will be the first to fix it?
Short, sweet, and fluffy shipfic with everyone's favorite musician pair! For the purposes of this fic, Vinyl is not mute.
Cover art used with permission from Strandedpenguin. You should give his gallery a look-see if you enjoy art of the musical pons and AJ building an Ikea product.
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I loved it!!! 20 Stars!!!
Not half bad, Pinkie giving advice was my personal favorite scene.
I don't think I know how to word this properly but the characters felt, real in this story Octavia and Vinyl both had realistic conflicts and a satisfying conclusion, honestly I thought you were going with the "have sex and all your problems will disappear" ending but you decided to just have them have a night of fun... And then maybe sex keep up the good work!
I'ts not what I'm used to but I loved it all the same. It was very cute. keep it up.
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I struggle so hard with fan characters like this. Knowing so little about them does allow for characterization beyond what we could have, saaay with one of the mane 6, but there's definitely a line that can be crossed, and dealing with a fan character, that line gets blurry. Honestly, I skirted this issue by appealing to the reader. I played upon our routines, the monotonous tasks we do every day. With that, all I had to do was make the dialogue match what we have. (elegant vs. off the cuff)
And yeah, I don't write clopfics, but I tend to say that my fics end where clopfics begin.
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! It means the world to me.
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When I came up with the idea of the "mopeshake," I knew only one pony could be the one to introduce it. Also, anyone who knows me knows I lurve Pinkie. So much so I made a LunaPie shipfic. That's dedication. Thanks for letting me know how you felt!
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My stories are usually like candy. You pop one up when you want a quick sugar rush. I'm glad you enjoyed it despite not being what you normally read! Thanks for taking the time to comment and read!
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What is that, a uhh, 400% on metacritic? I'll take it! Thanks for reading and commenting, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Wow, good fic.
I liked how realistic it was, they weren't even having relationship trouble or anything as might be true in another fic, their relationship was just kinda dulling out as happens so often.
Anyway, great job!
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Thank you!
I always love OctaScrach- I could even call it a personal favorite ship of mine. Glad to see there's another awesome one here.
So sweet.