Luna has never had an alarm clock until now, but can she handle the powers that it may posses?
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Excellent! Glad to see it worked out wel!
So, this was a different type of story than that of what I usually write, I hope you guys enjoyed it, and if not make sure to let me know why!
It's silly, it makes little sense and I LOVE IT!
Awesome nonsense is one of my favorite kinds of stories This really deserves to be featured!
>>751273751273 You didn't do a good job the description already gave me my opinion. Nevertheless I will read it.
That's one hell of a sturdy clock... then again, I imagine it'd have to be of the same make as one built to survive Celestia.
Structural invulnerability, combined with flame resistance.... sounds about right.
You deserve a like. It was great except you need to remember that Luna sleeps during the day and rules until the sun comes up.
>>752407752407 I can only hope for that. But thank you!
>>752434752434 Hey, can there really be anything better than such a clock? It'll wake you for sure!
I love stories about Luna trying to adjust to modern times
fucking technology man
Awesome, I LOVE it
>>752484752484 You don't want to see her playing a horror game...
few errors here and there but it's a really a funny story, deserved my 'like'
>>752512752512 lol that would be interesting
You guys are totally making my day right now
This is the type of shorts I love.
If only my laptop was built like that clock...
Easy to turn off, and indestructable.
I have like an eight minute bootup and a one minute shutoff!
I was hoping it would end like that, perfect sitcom ending.
This is great! It reminds me of one of my earlier fics. I would award you with a follow, but my phone is being idiotic. Keep up the good work!
>>752714752714 Thank you!
lol. those damn. alarm clocks.
"To her dismay, it kept ringing the song of its people continually..."
BAHAHA! This was great!
>>752860752860 Image... so... large....
complaining about large images?
Yes, it got bigger.
That was quite cute. I saw that ending coming a long ways off, but it still got me giggling.
>>752421752421 Yeah, thanks for thinking it does. But at this point I don't know if it will even though it is somewhat close.
>>753438753438 I thought it would be better to show my train of thought instead of praise. This was great and it requires a confetti sneeze.
>>753461753461 Thanks for your spray of confetti, it is greatly appreciated.
Lol, that was great. Awesome story
>>753496753496 Y U SO GENERIC!
>>753502753502 Because I couldn't think of anything else to say D:
How about this : "MUFFINS ARE GREAT! AWESOME STORY!"
>>753506753506 But there were no muffins here... or were they MUFFIN around in the kitchen?
>>753512753512 OH! XD
But I still like muffins!
>>753514753514 Derpy does not approve of you taking her muffins.
>>753526753526 I bake my own damn muffins damn it!
Derpy can have some if she wants...
>>753532753532 Could you both hush up. I'm making cupcakes with Dashie...
>>753697753697 NOOOO I SHALL SAVE YOU DASHIE!!!
or... we can have cupcakes together
>>753711753711 Have a chocolate one then, I'm sure Dashie's finished with the frosting. I'm not gonna kill her, I need her for my writing (even if I do pick on her)
>>753711753711 NO! You crazy people D:
>>753723753723 there is always the Robo-Dash 9000 to replace her if anything goes wrong and a cupcake suddenly takes her into an alternate dimension.
>>753743753743 Hay, that's no good, she wanted someone to go to watch the Wonderbolts and there's no way I'm going with a robot. I mean I already payed for the tickets and everything.
>>753727753727 Have a brownie!
Why did she not see the button when she examined the clock? Silly Luna, be more thorough!
Also, that is one very tough alarm clock.
Also also, someone had to place that alarm clock there, and set it...
>>755302755302 well, I'm sure that Celestia isn't that much of a troll... but who knows
It's good for a laugh, I'll give it that. However, I find that some parts doesn't exactly read so well. By that, I mean that in some places, you made it overly wordy, such as repeating words that is honestly unnecessary, or the phrasing was awkward.
I have nothing to say but good job. It was a very nice story full of 'I HATE THAT ALARM CLOCK! WHY DOESN'T IT TURN OFF!'
I love these Luna stories! Luna is best pony!
Also, you described my mornings perfectly in this story. Stupid alarm clock...
What do you mean? The Luna Games still haunt me. 4 MONTHS!
YOUR FATE HAS BEEN SEALED! IT DIDN'T HAVE TO END THIS WAY... YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO DIE!
COME OUT LITTLECREATURES!
Poor, poor Luna, can't figure out a simple clock. Poor girl needs a crash course bad!
As to Celestia... 1000 years of regret indeed.
The clock has made my aggravation double!!! and once again Trollestia saves day.
Where did Celestia get a clock made out of orichalcum?
And whey did she give it to Luna?
Ayeyeye, poor Luna.