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Advantage of being prereader: FIRST POSTAGE RIGHTS!
Excellent! Glad to see it worked out wel!
So, this was a different type of story than that of what I usually write, I hope you guys enjoyed it, and if not make sure to let me know why! ![]()
Awesome nonsense is one of my favorite kinds of stories
This really deserves to be featured!
That's one hell of a sturdy clock... then again, I imagine it'd have to be of the same make as one built to survive Celestia.
Structural invulnerability, combined with flame resistance.... sounds about right.
You deserve a like.
It was great except you need to remember that Luna sleeps during the day and rules until the sun comes up.![]()
few errors here and there but it's a really a funny story, deserved my 'like'
This is the type of shorts I love.
Also, this:
If only my laptop was built like that clock...
Easy to turn off, and indestructable.
I have like an eight minute bootup and a one minute shutoff!
This is great!
It reminds me of one of my earlier fics. I would award you with a follow, but my phone is being idiotic.
Keep up the good work!
"To her dismay, it kept ringing the song of its people continually..."
complaining about large images?
That was quite cute. I saw that ending coming a long ways off, but it still got me giggling.
Why did she not see the button when she examined the clock? Silly Luna, be more thorough!
Also, that is one very tough alarm clock.
Also also, someone had to place that alarm clock there, and set it... ![]()
It's good for a laugh, I'll give it that. However, I find that some parts doesn't exactly read so well. By that, I mean that in some places, you made it overly wordy, such as repeating words that is honestly unnecessary, or the phrasing was awkward.
I have nothing to say but good job. It was a very nice story full of 'I HATE THAT ALARM CLOCK! WHY DOESN'T IT TURN OFF!'![]()
I love these Luna stories! Luna is best pony!
Also, you described my mornings perfectly in this story. Stupid alarm clock...
Poor, poor Luna, can't figure out a simple clock. Poor girl needs a crash course bad! ![]()
As to Celestia... 1000 years of regret indeed. ![]()
The clock has made my aggravation double!!! and once again Trollestia saves day.
Where did Celestia get a clock made out of orichalcum?
And whey did she give it to Luna? ![]()







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