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Lunae


I love writing. I love ponies.

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Vinyl Scratch and Octavia are roommates at McMare Johnson College of Music in Ponyville. Vinyl loves to blast the dubstep, while Octavia plays her soothing cello. They must find away to set their differences aside to live in peace and harmony.

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Yeah, so, I finished reading the whole story, such as it is. In all honesty, meh. It's a good idea for a story, but it never goes anywhere. I feel like you could definitely have written more about the differences between 'Tavi and Vinyl. More playing up of their differing musical tastes, more personality clash. As it is, this story doesn't do anything. They meet, they have one tiny argument, then they become friends. There's nothing organic about the whole thing; it just feels rushed.

-Tricondon

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Oops :rainbowlaugh: I'd better go and fix that

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Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to use your advice.

I like where this is going.

good intro to this. i like good friend :)
:ajsmug: oh and FIRST!!!!
lol

im glad there is a fic where tavi is actually having fun :heart::twilightsmile:

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