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Snowliasion


Romance and Slice of Life Writer

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Snowy Haze is a young pegasus filly who has no idea what she wants to do with her life. Her parents for reasons unknown are convinced that she'll end up as a weather pony, yet Snowy's fate may lead her in an entirely different direction.

Prequel to: A Book for a Pegasus

Set in the Quill and Blade universe by Crystal Wishes and Anzel.
Artwork by: Ka-samy
Editors: sixkiller5

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 26 )

Dear Princess Celestia,

Aaaaaahhhhhhhh. Your sun torments me like when your sister eats the last slice of cake in front of your face. Speaking of your sister, would you mind reconsidering the idea of eternal night?

-Let Me Sleep

The grand entrance of Subtle Touch!

I expect great things from the stallion-amongst-mare, can't wait to see what's in store for the trio.

7108123 Subtle Touch best earth pony friend.
7107988 I know right?

All three, in a row, and so totally worth it. It was a pleasure to see how you've advanced with your horsewords in so little time, and they were all adorabul :rainbowkiss: I'm eager to see what else you've planned Snowy!

7119862 Thank you Edukas I hope you'll enjoy my future horse words.

This is a cute prequel, Snow. You're wielding friend characters very nicely, and this definitely captured the slice of life of a young filly.

There are a few grammatical nitpicks I spotted along the way, but Edu summed it up best. You're progressing with your horsewords. :)

another good chapter, keep up the good work.

What kind of monster licks the frosting off a donut?!
Well, he's a badass, so I'll forgive him.

This was greatly amusing again, though Snowy really needs to mind where she's going; bumping in to things... or ponies might get her into trouble at some point. :rainbowlaugh:

Ah well, who's rump is the worst she could bump into anyways?

Holy moly, those colts sure got a bit invasive in Autumn's personal space before Touch established some boundaries. :rainbowdetermined2:

I can see the dynamic starting to form between Snowy, Autumn, and Touch. It'll be fun to see what happens in the future as things continue to change.

And of course the close with Ms Mom, she has got her daughters back.

Well, I'm up to speed. I am looking forward to the next installment of this.

7152538 chapter 3 is with my editor right now

7152558 Excellent. At least I have something to look forward to in the near future. Today has simply not been my day. :twilightsheepish:

things are moving up for snowy, can't wait to see where this will go. :heart:

as always it's a pleasure to edit this for you

stay awesome snowy

A (part-time) delivery mare for Sunridge Sweets. Thanks to Mask I know where this is going.

Look out world, there's a new delivery mare in the greater Canterlot area!

Oh Autumn, you go gettem girl. Don't stop. You're doing good.

Touch better step up his game.

So there she was, peddling muffins door to door. Her friend's parents, Definitely-Not Princess Celestia, random ponies banished to the AU AU, all without a care in the world. Then out of nowhere a tingling runs across her flank in a very specific pattern. A few CGI effects later and bing, bang, boom, she's got her cutie mark.

The crowd goes wild!

Streamers fill the air!

Get back to Ponyville Pinkie, you aren't tagged in this story!

:pinkiehappy:

No!

Now, where was I? Oh yes. Snowy later learns that it might be a wise idea to start latching her bedroom door. Luckily she critically saves the moment despite a random dad appearance.

Three weeks later Sunridge Sweets considers pegasus flavor. Future Velvet is pleased.

another good chapter,
a very good cutie mark story IMO
that scene where snowy shows her cutie mark to her parents brought some tears to my eyes.


stay awesome!

Have I told you how much I envy your ability to write Slice of Life this well? This is criminally well done.

And now I hear about a Clop-Fiction story to go along with it? You're a regular human-Swiss Army Knife.

7284069 Why thank you Blessed One I hope you continue to enjoy my work.

Touch, you lucky son of a b—

I wonder what kind of trouble he would be in now. Was probably worth it anyway.

'Did he just really...' Yeah, I did. :derpytongue2:

That's a pretty sweet start :) maybe the two first chapters could have be merged?

Your Title Is Exactly The Title I Was Using For A Story I Was Working On XD Good Story Btw ;3

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