Ever wonder what happens when you get really lost?
Well two brothers are about to find out that getting lost is easy but getting found can be hard. Will they be able to return home, or will they find out that Equestria holds more secrets than even the princesses know about.
A story filled with, humor, adventure, excitement, guns, girls, history, genealogy, and did I mention guns?
A fan-fic from an unapologetic white christian male who was put through hell growing up and still hasn't lost faith, works at a Gun Manufacturer (Rhymes with Uber) in the US. Loves to write novels sci-fi/fantasy.
Chapters (20)
I like the way this started, I do hope you continue it when you have time.
IT WAS SO GOOD .3. PLEASE CONTINUE! i wanna see how Arron and his brother find they're way back!
Well that escalated quickly.
good job on this chapter, doesn't feel too rushed, gave plenty of build up for future chapters and all round enjoyable
Good chapter.
Good story.
I encourage you to continue!
Keep having fun writing this!
Good chapter.
I will wait for part 2
Fair enough.
Ty for the Author note.
7135692 Doesn't it always!
If the two brothers were voiced, what would they sound like?
7727536 Honestly I didn't really think about it. Though I did base the brothers on real life people so they might sound like them, but it's really up to you. That's what's so great about the imagination every person who reads a story can make the characters look and sound like anyone they want them to. This is one of the biggest reasons I don't like books being turned into Movies or TV shows, it kills a reader's imagination!
I read a really good analogy about this very thing. "I really loved the Harry Potter books but after seeing the movies, when I went back to re-read the books I could only visualize them as the actors instead of the characters I had imagined them to be."
In short I have an opinion...yes, but I'd prefer that you make the characters sound the way you hear them in your head.
Cancelled? Woohoo! Freedom at last!
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Karma says hi.
This is very interesting god spoke to Celestia I hope you finish the story keep up the good work
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I have been away for work, but now that I'm back I can continue the story. Yes, God speaks and answers anyone who is willing to ask and then listen. That is one thing I've had to learn the hard way. God knows what we need, when we need it, but he doesn't always (or ever) give us immediate answers to our prayers. We must be patient, after all he is immortal and we are not.
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Do you still need help with this? I read in an earlier chapter that you were running out of ideas