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7165933 In the end, if you like it Constant Reader, I am at least content.

I hope you don't mind, but I faved it because I trust you are going to give me one hell of a product.

Good start to the fanfic, I look forward to seeing more.

Imma read it so hard!

Thanks for sponsoring me! *hugs*

The topmost pony in the cover art is wearing a mask, right?

The Authority control over the stations/settlements is giving me a real Metro 2033 vibe. Liking the story so far.

7192069 yup! Tho I had the Authority fleshed out before I played Metro, it definitely became an influence

He told us all, his faithful listeners throughout the wide wasteland, about the mare who had stormed out from her stable to do battle with the evils of the world… and a little town called Arbu.

...Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hell.

7208194 that moment was so traumatizing first time around. At 4 Am

Mmmmmm, a grim start, but the darker the history, the more advturous the journey.

Your book has been advertised on the new FoE facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

I'm beyond sad that I've let my work make me slip up with my duty to the FoE community, I've been waiting for this for so long, and I'm just now learning it's a thing.

I'm sorry...

7208194 let the slow downslide begin


also mom-related flashbacks for Balmy

Just putting it out there, but thanks for writing a male protagonist in 1st person. Story has been good so far, and having no real geographical link to the main 4 FOE stories is good as well. :)

This is great so far. Looking forward to more.

Tradewinds in FoE-verse? *yeee*

Alright, I think I'll stay with this one for the long run.

Awsome story, waiting for more.

He told us all, his faithful listeners throughout the wide wasteland, about the mare who had stormed out from her stable to do battle with the evils of the world… and a little town called Arbu.

...well fuck. :ajbemused:

Aaaaaah I wanna read more already. :derpytongue2: I'm totally enjoying this already.

I sure know about Lunangrad, but I know shit about Fallout Equestria.

Better read anyway~

Salt Lick pursed his lips. I knew he had a point. I didn’t have to do this at all. Technically, I was sto;; a few months from my birthday, and so a few months from when my name enters the rotation. On top of that, the idea of filling in for a dead or injured loved one was respected in Mosaic but no one expected it of me for a lot of reasons. Most of those reasons were good reasons, honorable reasons. Some of them were not.

STO;;

“You need to know three things before we wander in there. First, the Crusader was a kid. Almost a stallion, but mostly a kid. He always complained when I told him that, but being a stallion is more than age and it’s more than having the heart. Second, you may already know this, but Lunangrad is both similar and completely different from the rest of the Wasteland. The similarities are mundane and don’t matter, but the differences are deep and all hidden away, guarded by things scarier than guns. Third? Third is that the kid was the smartest pony I ever knew, but also the stupidest.”

Is this a reference to your first story? I suspect it might be...

The name Balm makes me think of Coconut Balm, which is what I'm going to insist on calling the protag. Because coconut balm in wastelands. It's a good image.

Swift Balm isn't as good as Coconut Balm

YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESIT'STRADEYBABY

Ah, it seems things end here.

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